You See, You Hear

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There are those who go through life without finding that one special person. The one who will see you as you are, and love you just the same. The one who will listen to you when you're down, and smile with you when you're happy. It takes a special kind of bond to achieve this kind of relationship. So special, in fact, that too few find such people whether they be friends, family, or significant others.

Husky and Injun know they have found each other's perfect halves.

Foreword

An entry for The 5 Senses Writing Contest hosted by Librarian.

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Isadora_Quagmire #1
Chapter 3: Oh wow I loved the last chapter, you've wrapped it up so well~
Amalya #2
Chapter 3: I really do like the idea of having two disabled, but still wholly capable individuals, paired like this. They have a fascinating dynamic, though I am unsure how they are communicating so effectively. Is Injun reading Husky's lips when they talk or is Husky using sign language? And I was unsure Husky knew what the time was in the beginning.

Otherwise, the way you explored their characters and how they behaved the way they did in working around their handicaps was fascinating. Injun in particular with how he avoids taxis and otherwise pulls off a regular, non-impaired individual on a regular basis. I know it happens often enough but it's interesting to see it brought to life here. Likewise, with Husky working around his inability to see. Cooking would certainly be tricky but not impossible; I can totally see pasta being doable. lol Though I did laugh at Injun's mention of the cooking/food not always being great.

Your third chapter was quite a surprise. I was totally not expecting the split with how it was set up. With only a little bit of redundancy, you managed to pull it off well enough. The constant shifts, showcasing the similarities and differences they're aware of, is interesting and does at least keep the reader engaged. I particularly enjoy the description of perceptions with how each individually experiences their love making.

The final paragraph is a nice, tender way to top it all off. They are both perfectly imperfect and thus work absolutely beautifully together. Good job overall and I wish you luck in the contest! ^_^
chuchu94 #3
Chapter 3: You remember your story about Myungsoo and Karam? That was a hit. An Epic story. Something what cannot be described in words , because was too good (but I tried to describe XD_
But, as the end appeared I have no words, not because it is worse. I have no words because it is too fantastic, so sometimes there are situation which are hard to describe by words.
Ok, I have a hard time writing this comment, because my lame words are not good enough(i try, at least XD)
The scene was so fluffy and nice. Told scene by scene, and the emotion pretty well described...
You just 've got talent!!!!! <3 <3 <3
I will nto compare it,to the other story , because Karam x Myungsoo and this ..is too epic. I cannot comapre them two, because their two are too perfect ^-^
-reader Chuchu
singsongsungjong #4
Great story! ^_~
Frosty_Maiden #5
Chapter 3: Well I liked the story, but you realise if your born deaf, you actually cannot speak properly. I mean you wouldn't know how to sound any words. And you use sign language.
It might be better to say they are partially deaf and blind...just to make it more accurate :)

I love the story though. people still feel awkward about dating people with disabilities and its something that needs to be broken. Love is shared by everyone, even if you can see it or hear it etc.
I loved the format of this last chapter! Its really cool and well thought out!
Nice job Luke-y :p
Frosty_Maiden #6
Chapter 2: wait....I am a little confused. He is blind? Like literally blind?
Um, then how does he know how to cook, or if the pasta is ready? Or if Injun is staring at him?
I am so confused.
I will read on and perhaps be slightly more enlightened *.*
chuchu94 #7
Chapter 2: whoa~ And now is Injoon-shhi point of view. Nice point of view, he he .
around is love and it is noticeable that those two cannot live without each other; omg , Poor Injoon :( Why is he deaf?
But, anyway it was so lovely ^^ it showed the magical and secretful aura which tied these both together.
perfect~ <3
chuchu94 #8
Chapter 1: I love them together, di I say it? That was so adorable *.*
They were so gentle towards and around each other. they were able to understand each other without a words. they were a perfect mates in a love meaning.
perfect story as always. Keep it up.
Frosty_Maiden #9
Chapter 1: okay first, great chapter. Seriously should be upset since your my competition...but le sigh, I can't be. I worship your work too damn much to be mad or miserable.
Its a very adorable chapter <3 and I hate it...I lie terribly, I love it <3

Also who do they call him husky? And POOH BEAR? Yikes...I would personally smack a guy if he called me pooh bear, ugh not into cutsie names.
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