Once upon a Summer day

Description

A followed passion that lead to irreplacable bonds in her life

Foreword

Right, so this was the first fanfic I took the courage to write and looking and reading back at it I've seen that I've improved a lot with my newer ones yet I wanted to start posting my fanfics in chronological order. At the time that I wrote this Ricky was my Ultimate Bias and he's still one of the most adorable people ever even if he isn't my UB anymore.

This fic is cute and fluffy and the OC(Summer) is still quite the innocent young girl and I kinda based the experiences that happens on a lot of stuff that are my dreams soo....yeah it isn't my best work but this fic will always be something special and I still squeal everytime Ricky does something Ricky-like in this fic XD

*And my title ...but please feel free to comment over anything! I really don't mind constructive critisism It'll be a great help with my future fics anyway :)

 

Taekoppa
Quite a long chapter though forgot to warn hehe

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SayAMplus
#1
Chapter 7: I'm sorry for not commenting earlier, to the previous chapters as well, but I didn't have the time to write a proper comment! :/
So, I liked the conclusion of this story. Your writing flows well, as usual, and the story itself was cute, funny and well... fluffy!
I can't wait to read any other stories you'll write in the future! :D
SayAMplus
#2
Chapter 4: I really liked this chapter! They are so cute... I also like it when the rest of Teen Top appear, they're hilarious.
May I ask... how many chapters will there be? Can't wait until your next update :)
SayAMplus
#3
Chapter 3: Hi! I just read the first chapters of your story and I must say that I like it. I don't listen to Teen Top much, so I don't have that personal attachment with their characters in the fanfic, but I found myself rooting for Ricky and Summer.
As for the writing, it's really beautiful as always, though maybe you should make your paragraphs a bit shorter? I'm not really sure.
Anyway, I'm anticipating the next chapter, hoping for more interactions between the main characters :D