[1] Be Mine (내꺼 하자)

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Love at first sight.

Some will just take this as a joke or a nonsense phrase.. but

what if 'you' experienced it first-hand?

How are you going to deal with it, if the one who's receiving your thing called 'love' was the most uncooperative and

coldest girl you've ever met in your whole life?

(or maybe just to YOU?)

 

 

 

"Do you believe in 'love at first sight'?

because even me, the Oh-so-great Lu Han actually fell for that. Tch!"

 

"I do hate him, but I feel like I'm slowly changing...

Is it possible to switch the 'hate' to 'like' ... ??

 

 

 

A story of a spoiled kid who grew up with every thing he ever wanted in life

(except for the only person he wants to get)

and

the girl who was born with everything and... (as weird as it sounds)  contented with what she have.

(A normal person will never be contented)

 

 

 

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[[ Started: APRIL 25, 2014    Completed (till C.80): JULY 25, 2014 ]]

 

Foreword

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Nari's POV /    POV

 

His friends saw me before him because I’m actually facing his back.

I stood right behind him and in just a second after he turned around….my dripping wet hard book slammed flat in his gay face.

His friends eyes widened on my action while he’s still frozen.

“Next time, don’t claim something you don’t really own because as far as I know,

this place belongs to the school, belongs to him!" I pointed out one of his friends

"and thank you for ruining my book and forcing me to change my uniform. I appreciate it very much."

Then, I dragged myself out of the soccer field.

 

Just as I thought that was the last thing he'll do, he proved me wrong.

 

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LuHan's POV


"Woah, fiesty" Tao commented, "Just my type" Kris chukled and taps my left shoulder.

"but I must say, she's cute" Lay snatched the soccer ball I'm still holding "and hot." Xuimin added.

"Hyung, I think I'm falling in looove~" I glared at my friends one by one and stop at Chen who's on my right,

eyes narrowing with my signature fierce look but not as deadly as Kris'.

"Dude, she's mine alright? Go find your own!" he held up his both hand defensively, grinning mischievously .

I turned to watch her retreating back again. "By the end of this year, she'll be mine."

 

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Narrator / 3rd person's POV

 

"What are you doing here? Are you here to apologize 'cause I--"

He scoffed. "Apologize? oh please. I don't even know such word exist!" he stepped closer making her stepped back automatically.

"Jung Nari, be my girlfriend." he smirks at the long pause from the latter, thinking he got her there.

"A-are you a-asking me to--" "NO. I will never ASK anyone, that's atually an order! starting tomorrow you--"

"YAH! Are you insane?! What's the purpose of owning a hospital when you can't even have a proper check-up?"

"What?" .."Tsk.poor you. Visit your own hospital, okay? I'm outta here!" she announced and steps forward.

but before she could walked out again. Luhan grasp her wrist and glared at her, she didn't even flinch like normal students.

"Did you just rejected me? ME?! this LU HAN??!" Luhan almost shouted at her in disbelief.

"Well..if that was your intention in the first place..then yes, master."

 

LuHan just stared at her till she's gone once again.

 

 


 

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kala197
#1
I'm back to this again
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 191: Can't wait to read the sequel ><
jewel_09
#3
im back to re-read this series and maybe get some inspiration for my own stories >.<
rooftop-soliloquy
#4
Chapter 191: wow q.q <33
WholesomeRain
#5
Chapter 139: This story has reminded me that i'm an unstable fangirl...
Angelz0715 #6
Chapter 139: Cute story
lovemrchu #7
<3
Exotic91 #8
Chapter 191: I really wanted to rush and read part 2 as soon as I reached the end of the confession chapter but then you made me cry all over again in 'It happened' and then squeal from all the fluff overload in the bonus chapter. I honestly felt like I was suffering from multiple personality disorder because I had such a vast amount of reactions throughout the entire story. It was mindblowing. I absolutely loved it to death. I'll spaz more after I read part 2 (unless I'm too excited and want to hurry to the next story). You're AWESOME ^0^
Js2MDubu #9
omo apink