Alone

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Sunyoung sees her life as messed up. She’s an outcast, nobody likes her, all her friends are from the Internet, and it turns out that that one person whom she thought she could always trust has a completely different side. Suicide even starts to be an option in Sunyoung’s mind... until a confused, warm-hearted boy pops out of nowhere and manages to crumble her bitter walls. But with the new problems that arouse and surreal complicated information she learns, Sunyoung doubts any happiness she ever encounters will ever stay.

 

"You're not any of those... You're perfect, just the way you are."

"Everyone lies."

"I am not everyone."


This story is, although I do base some of my stories on movies, dramas, or books, 100% my idea and if it seems to be in any way similar to another story, that is 100% coincidental. I do not (purposely) copy/steal/plagiarize from other stories on AFF and I expect you to do the same. Thanks and enjoy~

 


Written:

Start - April 24, 2014•

End - June 7, 2014•

Foreword

- CONTEST ENTRY -

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 STORY TITLE : Alone

 RATINGS : Pg (there's swearing like once)


 WORD COUNT : 22,606 (I KNOW, I KNOW, BUT PLEASE BEAR WITH ME UNTIL THE END OTL)

 COMPLETED : June 7, 2014

- Prompts Used -

09. The moments of joy are so short and the sadness is forever.

11.

 


Note: Like 60% of this is based off of my life and what I used to go through frequently, therefore I cannot say this story is 100% fictional. I just used Luna because I used to roleplay as her in Starfish RP (plus I absolutely love her and she deserves way more fanfic love, and just more love in general)... and I sorta posted something there about my situation, so I just got the idea. Chanyeol because... well, why not? He is my favorite K member, anyway. I don't (think I) ship them though. Are they even a ship? I don't know. If they aren't, looks like I just created them, harthart ❤❤ SunYeol, or ChanYoung, or YoungYeol or ChanSun, or even LuYeol or ChanNa, sail away~~ ☀☁

This story is an angst-ish life-based one-shot, and it's my first time really writing in this genre. I mostly replaced me with Luna, yippee. Anything angsty written by me is only actually worth reading when I use my own situations. OTL On the bright side, it's easier to write in this genre this way.

Um, so all the flashback events happened to me, which would explain the English names, but everything with Chanyeol is obviously made up lol. I know this probably sounds like I'm just writing about life (and in a way somewhat ranting at the same time), and that's sorta what I'm doing, but I guarentee that my life is the farthest from boring. But pssht, dude, less than half of this story is actually real. There's a bit of fantasy too~

Yes, I did use the prompts, if you're wondering xD Hey, the rules said to use the prompts, but did they say those are the only things you can use? :)


Thank you so much Hiirah from Dear My Deer Graphic Shop for the beautiful poster and background! It's... beautiful ;A; I love it a lot. I don't remember asking for two quotes from the same shop, and they're both supposed to be said by Chanyeol, but oh well xD I love the way it turned out anyhow <3

                    

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lalaloopsie #1
beautiful poster
Liana_DS #2
Chapter 1: sorry i'm late. actually i've read this lika a month (or two months?) ago but my internet goes so slowly that i can't comment...
anyway, this is a very good angst fic. i can feel how lonely luna (and you, if this is your experience) is. and how comforting chanyeol's presence is for luna. i really love the two together but nearly no one writes about them as pair, friendship, siblings, or (even) romance... TT.TT
my favourite part is when chanyeol semiconsciously hugged luna in his sleep and muttered about his noona. deadly cute! XD
but to be honest, the explanation of luna's past is a bit too long. and some original charas (luna's past friends) made me confused a bit because there are many of them.
still, i love this!!! write more lunayeol if you have time ^^
RNurfita
#3
Chapter 1: it's an amazing story! i wonder how if it happens in the real life o_o
sunyoungster
#4
Chapter 1: OMG I GOT TEARY EYED GOD BLESS YOU FOR BEING SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER
sunyoung93 #5
Park sibling is back! love this story. Love this couple. Author-nim fighting! you are jjang:-)
nephesh
#6
Chapter 1: Love it so muuch. Alto if this really happened to you (I guess it happened, minus the supernatural part), I'll tell you, just stay strong. God is there.
shiny_luna
#7
i lve this couple but unforturenatly no one write about them happy you did
princess_snowflake #8
Chapter 1: daebak!!!!!!