Yet, Because of You!

Description

A short story about how to be loyal.

Foreword

This story is my 1st in here. Also, this's my 1st time write a fan-fiction in english, so BIG SORRY for my bad english.

Please. Subcribe. Comment. UpVOTE. Support. Me!.

Because I wanna try my best till the last chapter :) Thanks y' :)

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sparklingstephany #1 Jul 1, 2015 07:10:30

Chapter 1: Hey there ^^
I saw your post on my wall and I thought to give it a go, because it's been a while since I read fan-fiction, especially yoonkwang FF.
Plus, yoona is lee seung gi's girlfriend now, I kinda feel bad if I steel seung gi's girl and make her into gikwang's girlfriend hehehehhe... :D
The story itself is good, but there's one point you must pay more attention.
Just like other comment, you could consider someone to be an editor or translator.
But you already did a great job, it takes a great courage to put your FF, plus it's English!!
Fighting!! I'll wait for next chapter!! =)

xSunnyVanilla #2 Apr 19, 2014 22:29:57

Chapter 1: It's very cute, but it takes me a while to understand the English. Would you consider someone editing to better English? I'm not saying you have to because it's still very understandable and soooo cute. Just a suggestion!