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arcadiyans review shop

arcadiyans review shop  { created: 140412  } layout made with Torch's view

 

 

ABOUT
RULES
RUBRIC
FORM
Hello! I'm Yan, creator of this humble shop. I hope to improve my reviewing skills with this c:

 

FEATURED

DARK TIES by Nictaeny9
90% | review link


I HEAR YOUR VOICE
by B2UTYSONELOVER
93% | review link
1. Subscribe if you think you'll want me to review your story!! I'll make sure you are updated on the review.
2. I will review the first 10 chapters of your story. Request again if you want me to review the rest of the story.
3. Please do understand when I say I'm busy. I'm an incoming college freshman ^^;;
4. Do comment here to submit the form and when you've already read the review.
5. Let's be fair, okay? So no bashing of any form and let's be nice to each other.
6. I'm not the person who asks for credits, but they are highly appreciated c:
7. Put "dose" beside "over" in the form. This is to make sure you've read the rules hihi.
You have the choice whether you'd want me to review the layout/design of your story, as well. c: Just comment along with the form if you want me to review the layout as well.

Title: (5/5)
Description + Foreword: (5/5)
*Layout: (10/10)
Plot: (15/15)
Originality: (10/10)
Flow: (10/10)
Characterization: (10/10)
Writing Style: (10/10)
Grammar+Spelling: (15/15)
Enjoyment: (10/10)
Username:
Story Title:
Story Link:
Short Description:
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ANNOUNCEMENTS/STATUS

busy and not accepting requests

(140426): editted a bit to the look of the shop

❋ To Break Me (in progress)
❋ Twelve Chances (pending)
 Confetti (pending)
❋ The Possibility of Being Us (pending)
❋ Message In A Bottle (pending)

 
arcadiyan
I'm back from my short hiatus, but patience is a virtue. I'm doing my best to complete these.

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bts_kimtaehyung
#1
Username:Christine3006
Story Title:Blind Heirs
Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin
Short Description:A story of a blind girl who is rich but her eyes is blind because of depression.



The only thing that she can do to live in this cruel world is listening and hearing from both of her ears.



The only thing she do love is to play piano. It describes her feelings whenever she played it.



She was not blind before her parents were killed by a murderer.



She was adopted by a rich family but they never treat her like she is their real daughter .











But what if a guy comes to her life and change her life?



When she had smiled and have a good times with him,



Why do the guy have to leave her?



What if there will be love triangle?



What if a cold-hearted guy will fell in love with her


over:dose
miniflash
#3
Username: -LovingU-

Story Title: Message In A Bottle

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/658458/message-in-a-bottle-angst-oneshot-romance-you-kai-jongin

Short Description:
Kai is 14, whereas Jihye is 13.

Both neighbours, best friends, inseparable.

Until a problem occurred…

Kai leaves Jihye for America due to a scholarship.

They both swore to see each other in 5 years time.

At the same place, same time, where they last saw each other.

Leaving a message in a bottle, for each other to read in 5 years.

over:dose

Can you also review the layout design? Thank You~
kachinggu
#4
Username: balloon_

Story Title: The Possibility of Being an Us

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/609914

Short Description: Baekhyun and Saehwa were in love with each other, despite the only little things they knew about each other. But soon, it became a trouble.

over: dose
StellyBish
#5
Chapter 6: Thank you for the review ^^
About the 'before' and 'after' accident: I really wanted to do it like this because I wanted to describe what they were like before the murder and how things are changing now.
I will try better from now on! :)
B2UTYSONELOVER
#6
Chapter 5: Thanks for the fast review! (I think you just subscribed it and a few hours, you're done!)

Let me explain it about some things in case you're curious XD

Title : I've been wondering about a good title that can pique people's interest so that's why I chose 'I Hear Your Voice'. I know it's quite unoriginal but I think it just suits the story completely.

Description + Foreword : After I read your review, I just happened to think that you're right. The synopsis was too straightforward haha.

About the foreword, I have the tendency to write a small snippet (usually something that would grab reader's attention) in every story I write. I'm glad you didn't deduct points there XD

Characterization : You're right about this and I've nothing to say. Krystal seems to stand out a lot rather than Yoona in this first ten chapters but to be honest, Yoona is wordlessly the female lead. She seems to be overshadowed by Krystal because I haven't really brought up about her story and also her side story. That's matters to Xiumin also. About Jessica, she's merely a supporting character so yeah, it's self-explanatory.

Grammar + Spelling : Truthfully, I at English - I'm not a native speaker so obviously, my grammar is a mess haha. Nevertheless, I was mildly surprised by the marks XD

Overall, I really like the way you review my story. It just seems thoroughly reviewed and the fact that you took note of every detail pleases me to bits :)

And yeah, about your favourite character. I know why you picked Krystal. But for me, I'd choose Kyungsoo despite his dreadful life (;

Thanks again! I've already put credit for you hard work and I surely will come here again next time ^^
Chunkee__ #7
Username: Chunkee__
Story Title: Confetti
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/694386/confetti-changmin-romance-tvxq-yunho
Short Description: With a memory that will always be in her mind, she finds herself caught in a mess she never thought that it will happen.
over: dose

Thank you so much! Fighting!
Nictaeny9
#8
Chapter 4: Thanks for the very kind review! And yes, emotions from real life usually flows into my writing... May that's why you felt it was kinda real.
MamaShrimp
#9
Username: Mamashrimp
Story Title: Twelve Chances
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/651812/twelve-chances-romance-exo
Short Description: With no definite meaning to the emotion or even the idea of it, "Love" sends Lee Haemi twelve different chances to find out.
over: dose
Lovex2254 #10
Username: LoveX2254
Story Title: To Break Me
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/667344/to-break-me-angst-romance-zelo-idol-jongup-bap-daehyun
Short Description: They say that an ending is really a beginning to a new story, but we just don't know it yet. My story ended a long time ago and nothing new has ever begun. Each page I turn is a blank one, yet still I read on like a fool as if one of the pages will hold something spectacular.
over: dose