Cruel Fate

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We were meant to be... 

But in all the wrong ways.

 

 

We were happy together...  

 

But fate pulled us apart.

 

 

We found each other... 

 

But fate separated us again... 

 

 

 

Fate was cruel.

Foreword

Uhh so I'm reposting this on my new account because I didn't like my old account. I'm making it public now instead of friends only. Also going through an editing process, so I'll post this story chapter by chapter. 

 

NOTE!
There will be some mature themes. Swearing, cursing, implied (not detailed), maybe one  scene. It's a gang-ish story, after all. 

 

So first just wanted to say that I love Yongguk. Yeah... I really do. I just feel like he's perfection (?) So yeah. Kinda Daehyun biased too. Yeah...

 

Please love and support me! ^^

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syixinghun
#1
Chapter 4: Poor yongguk, why did her insult him like that haish. Okay i know im overreact rn
simpledumpling #2
Chapter 17: great story! very gripping, i really enjoyed it :) are you gonna post the epilogue anytime soon? ^_^
shapphire
#3
Chapter 17: No! Not again! Angst? Your angst?! Like seriously?!! This story is the proof, what if I really cry???

Nevermind about my words, Author-nim. That's how I appreciate your work, I'm afraid of crying. I will wait the epilogue~

*stealing glances at 'Thoughts That Were'*
*not regreting my words*
#careless
Hwaiting, Author-nim~! p(^-^)q
shapphire
#4
Chapter 16: Great! Author-nim! Great! *clap clap clap*

I just.. it's just... You have that ability to almost make me cry, there's not a whole tear but you know~ Just something wet in the corner of my right eye, like when you are yawning. Maybe due to the time, it's 11:40 pm. No, I didn't yawn. It's really you made my emotions stirred up, mixed, or anything similar to that

But still your efforts are amazing! Your attempt to make me cry is deserved to be appreciated! I'll put this story's link in my profile or anywhere I can put it. No worries, I'm not advertising service. This is what I want to do, hope we can meet again after this story in another Yongguk story of yours~ (^-^)/ Or just another B.A.P stories

Oh, you really promised her Daehyun. Sorry for not believing in you and also Youngjae! Why did you do nothing?!

And I did reread my previous comments, the worst scenario happened!
(-. .-)
shapphire
#5
Chapter 15: When she told Daehyun she was with Yongguk, my heart sunk at her words! As if my heart is Daehyun's heart. When Daehyun told her he would help I pressed my hand on my mouth, not letting exaggerating grasp! But stopped when Daehyun told the plan, I didn't trust him

If he really loves the OC, he will protect her no matter what. If it's included put Yongguk in jail
Aha! I know it since the beginning of this chap! You did surprise me, Author-nim. So actually Yongguk didn't use, ah, ert reader! She's pregnant with Yongguk's baby!! What if Yongguk died and she told him she is pregnant when Yongguk is dying?! No, no! No! No! Worst scenario ever!
shapphire
#6
Chapter 14: Don't tell me Yongguk will die, Author-nim?! *copying Daehyun at B.A.P Attack when he hold the knife* *and actually pointing it up* *my favorite Daehyun action*

Didn't Daehyun get curious? Why did female OC stay away from him? And why did she return to her bedroom? Ah, I really want to know Daehyun's POV

If I were him, I would have died. I prefer find another woman to wait/get a woman's heart that doesn't belong to me. There are still women out there. Omona, my comment just get longer, nevermind~

He will propose! Does that mean they can be together? I doubt it but I have a little hope while the title said otherwise. On the other side, at the beginning of the story, Yongguk wanted the girl be safe. Means, living without him
Confusing~ @_@
shapphire
#7
Chapter 13: ...
... Aah...
\(; _ ;\) ba-ba
I'm speechless I can't speak!! That Yongguk... She... Daehyun is still sleeping...
Author-nim~! Thank for bringing Yongguk back, thank you~
But here I come with my own thought. Daehyun will set Yongguk free with the female OC, both of them eloping. O-mo-na~ Daehyun's sacrifice just too much! But, that's only my thought. I haven't finished until the last update *click 'Next'*
shapphire
#8
Chapter 12: Hi, Author-nim~ Long time no see (^0^)/ I always get the notification that you updated but my heart couldn't bear with this! This story hurts my heart so much I want to cry (; _ ;) But until today I haven't shed a tear~ But, poor my heart~! </3
She is happy with Daehyun and Daehyun really is kind~ (; _ ;)
I can't take this anymore!! *go to next chap*
Don't tell me that's Yongguk who called!
Missjessika
#9
Chapter 16: T-T T-T so sad ~~~~ !!!!!!
eyesthatsing #10
Chapter 15: Wow. More twist! I love it XD