the Prize

Our Love Story...

 

 

HYUKJAE POV

 

I win..?

I looked at Donghae. He’s smiling, but still in pain. Maybe I was too hard.. I feel sorry…

We have to bowed now, but I think he’s hardly stand up..

I helped him to stand. “thanks, Hyukkie,” he said calmly. But still, his face looks uncomfortable.

“is it so hurt..?” I asked, can’t hide my worry.

He smiled a little and shook his head. “no.. I’m okay..”
I sighed. Maybe he’s not in pain, but feeling uneasy with this condition.
The hall is full of yelled and shouted after the.. cute judge, Lee Joon said that I win this game.

 

Maybe he’s uncomfortable with crowds..

 

“yah, we have a winner here..” Xiah said between the shouts. “but, it’s not over yet.. The final score will be announce~”

I moved closer to Xiah. “too crowded, can we end this quick?” I whispered, then he gave a little nod.

“okay.. I’ll give it to Seung Ho now..” he said, then other handsome judge came between us.
 

Yells and shouts filling the hall wildly.
Aisshh.. I feel like was standing in a concert.

“hello everyone,” Seung Ho said. Yah, he’s handsome but.. The girls are too over excited.

“I have the result of Leader Competition in my hand now.” He said, showing a sheet of paper in his hand.

“err.. can you be a little quiet, guys?” Xiah said before letting Seung Ho to continue.

Then the audiences become quiet. Not too quiet, but it’s normal enough.

“okay.. Shall I continue?” Seung Ho asked and everyone yelled in agree.

 

“uhm, I’ll read the schore one by one first. Cooking Competition.” Then the hall become silent. Good, good.

“Lee Hyukjae wins with 86points against Lee Donghae who got 78 points,” he said.

 


Then crowd again, most from Fukuura. Ahh, not so fast, Hyukkie.. how about subject?

 

“uhm.. and Subject Competition.”

I sighed. I won’t win, I know.

“Lee Donghae wins with 100 points against Lee Hyukjae who got 92 points.” And hall full with surprise from audiences. I got surprised, too. Surprised because Donghae’s that genius for having the perfect score, and surprised because I can have score about 90++ like that.. because I think that exam thing is damn difficult..

“from that score, the both contestants were tie. Both score is 89.And.. Because Lee Donghae was lost from last game, Judo..” Seung Ho explained.

 

I hold my breath.

 

“Lee Hyukjae is the winner for this Leader Competition.”

 

Gosh.. I won?? Seriously?

 

Then hall were full of shouting and yelling. I stared at Donghae. He was looking at me, then smiled. Oh my god..
He’s so handsome..


“are you kidding?”

 

Aisshh.. Damn..!

 

That’s it. I have to forget about his statement that I accidentally heard. Forget it, Hyukkie. Forget it.

Suddenly some students from Fukuura ran into me in happiness.

 

Ah, I have to go. I don’t want to be in a crowds.

 

Then I ran out.

 

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DONGHAE POV

 

I saw him running away from Fukuura students. Ah, the winner.

 

Yeah, I know.. maybe I was too weak in front of him. But.. I can’t see him cry. He was cried when I’m locking him. I don’t know why.. I was shock then I loosen, afraid he’s hurt.
Then, he did the ippon. I already readying myself.. so.. that’s not a big problem for me, but.. I don’t know how to say to Rakooga. Especially Rox who already taught me. They’ll disappointed.

Ah, I better looking for Hyukkie. I’ll apologizing later.

 

-Few minutes later-

 

Oh, there he is. I found him at the right side of Fukuura gate. Huh, he’s climbing up the gate. I see.. he want to ran away.

“not so fast, monkey.” I said, make him freeze.

Err, wait. Why I called him ‘Monkey’? maybe because he looks like that when he climb that gate. But that’s cute enough for him..

He turned. “huh? Hae! What are you doing here?” he said in surprised.

“just walking around,” I lied. Aisshh.. I’m not lying. It’s true that I’m just walking around.

He climbed down, look embarrassed. Ah, so cute. I mean, yesss, I have another nickname for him. But what for? Ahh, you’re strange these days, fishy!

“huh?” he seems not believing me. Then he stared at me, realizing something.
“yah, what do you mean for calling me MONKEY!?” he pointed and shouting to me suddenly.

 

I smiled a little. “yah, you looked like a monkey when you climbed that.” I said, pointing at the gate. “the others were already lost you, anyway.” I added.

His face looks red. “Huh! So you called me monkey?? How about I call you.. FISHY??” he shouted and grinned, didn’t care about my last sentence.
Fishy?? Wait.. how did he knows that name??

 

“haha! I know that. Don’t think a monkey didn’t know anything, fishy..” he said proudly before I argued.

Ah, I got it.. he’s Xiah best friend, so.. it’s not hard for him to know the real name of my failed recipe.. Aisshh..

I sighed. “yah.. up to you.. I’ll still call you monkey anyway,” I said, then turns back.

 

“uhm, wait, Fishy..” he called me.

 

Aisshh.. why I felt my heart beats so fast when he called me that??

“ne?!” I turned to him.

“my rewards..??” he said while pouting.

Damn, he’s too cute to do that.. ANDI believe everyone were thinking the same thing about that.
Err, wait.. his rewards?

 

“what should I give to you?” I asked. Hmm, I hope it’s not the hard one..

He look thinking for a while, then stared at me. “can Fox leader and Vice got a servant, each,from Rox?”

 

I raised my brows. “What!?”

He chuckled. “yeah, you heard what I’ve said, right?”

Servant.. 2 of Rox will be Fox servants..?? That’s crazy!!

“but—“

“you already agreed, right..? Don’t say that.. you’ll break our promise..” he said, pouting his lips again.

Damn! If he doesn’t look this adorable, I will.. Kick him!

“can’t it just me..?” I said in protest.


He sighed. “I’m sorry, I’ve promised to Kibum.. I don’t know you’ll refuse this…” he said slowly, bowed his head down.

“aisshh..” I sighed. “who’s it..?? who will be the 2nd servant..?” I asked.

I hope that’s not Wookie, or Leeteuk hyung, or even Heechul hyung.. I’m afraid about their lovers..

“uhm.. Should I tell you now?” he asked.

“why not? Just tell me!” I said impatiently.

“well… Honestly, I don’t know…” he murmured. “so… can you wait at your school? I’ll go there with Kibum to tell who’s it.”

I’ve to wait at Rakooga? That means, I’ve to apologizing before giving Hyukkie the reward.

“don’t take too long, okay…” I said, then turned back.

“okay, Hae…”

When I headed to Rakooga, I realize something then stopped.

 

“What happened, Hae?” Hyukkie asked after saw me stopped.

I turned. “you… are you mad…?” I asked slowly.

I remembered about yesterday, when I… almost kissed him. Yeah, just almost.Damn, why does my heart feel a slight regrets by remembering I didn’t kiss him.

Wait. What?? Geez please shut up, myself.

“why should I?” he said innocently.

 

I sighed, more in relieve. “never mind.” Then headed back to Rakooga.

 

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KIBUM POV

 

“Hey, where have you been?” Xiah hyung said, after seeing Eunhyuk hyung came.

We’re all Fox were at library now, waiting for Eunhyuk hyung. He’s ran away from students when it announced that he’s the winner. I’m surprised, honestly.

“sorry guys, I.. uhm, I went to the toilet.” He said then grinned.

“yah whatever,” Xiah hyung rolled his eyes.

“congratulations, hyung,” I heard Taemin said.

“yeah, congratulations.” I added. Makes Eunhyuk hyung smiled proudly.

“Thanks.. Hehe…” he grinned.

“hey, how about the prize?” Xiah hyung asked.

Then Eunhyuk hyung stared at me.

“Kibum ah, I’ll gave you a present.” He said.

Huh? What present?

 

“ahem… actually, what I want to ask for a prize is… Servants.”

 

“what!?” most of us yelled in surprised.

He chuckled. “yeah, a servants for me and for Kibum.”

Hey… is that mean… Someone is going to be my slave…?

“but hyung…” I tried to argue even I know I will like it.

“what? You can which anyone you like.” He said, smiling.

Anyone..? can I which Siwon?? Uh hey, what am I thinking about…

“who will be your servant, hyung?” Minho asked.

Eunhyuk hyung raised his brows. “uhm.. Donghae, I guess…?” he said, pretending not hoping Donghae hyung too much, but I know he will which Donghae hyung for sure. I can see his face blushed everytime they met.

“Do you think he will agree?” Jonghyun asked. He just come from outside..

Eunhyuk hyung smiled, “I think he will…”

 

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KANGIN POV

 

I heard knocked from the door.

“who’s it?!” I shouted.

Then the door opened. “it’s me, Hae.”

Heechul sighed. “where have you been? We’re all waiting for you.”


Donghae bowed his head down. “I’m sorry, hyung. I’m sorry…” he said. His face shows guiltiness.

Leeteuk walk to him. “hey, it’s okay… you already worked hard.” He said. Ahh, such a sweet guy.

“you’re disappointed, aren’t you?” Donghae said again, now looking at everyone in room.

“of course not, hyung.” Ryeowook said.

“it’s just a game.”

Donghae smiled, “thank you.”

Ah, poor Hae. He never been like this. We’ve to cheer him now…

“hey, how about eat cakes in a café near my house?” I asked. Everyone know that café, their cakesis so delicious.

Leeteuk smiled to me. “yeah, Hae would love to…”

“ah, hyung.” Donghae said suddenly, then his face looks uneasier than before.

“what? You don’t want to..?” I asked.

He shook his head. “no.. not like that.. I mean… the rewards…”

“oh! What’s the rewards, Hae??” Sungmin said.

Donghae just silent. “they will come here.. to ask what they want.” Then he sit in a chair beside the couch.

Really.. Did he know the prize already?

His face is full of worry..

 

-Half hour later-

 

“where are they?? I’m hungry!!” Heechul yelled in frustration.

“Aisshh.. Me too..” I murmured.

Where are Fox, anyway?

“wait hyung,” Ryeowook stood up then walk towards kitchen. “I think I’ve made some cookies last night.” Then Yesung followed him behind.

Are they lovers? Since when? I wonder…

“Jungsoo ah, you hungry?” I asked my angel, I mean Leeteuk who sat beside me.

He shook his head and smiled.

 

Suddenly, I heard door’s knock.

“it’s them!” Sungmin yelled.

I heard Donghae sighed then he stood up to open the door. “yes..?” he said.

“uhm, Hae.” Said someone. Oh, it’s Hyukjae. With.. Kibum beside him.

Donghae widened the door open to let the two walk in. I can see behind them a lots of students peeking.

Then Donghae closed the door.

After the two of Fox sit down, the whole room goes silent.

“hyung, here.. Oh!” Ryeowook said in surprise while bringing a plate of cookies, followed by Yesung.

“Annyeonghaseyo, Kibum ah. Hyukjae ssi..” Ryeowook bowed.

“ne, annyeonghaseyo..” said both of Fox.

“hey, hello! Congrats, Hyukjae ssi!” Yesung suddenly yelled behind Ryeowook.

Hyukjae smiled. “thank you.”

Yesung walked closer then sat in a single couch while bringing his turtle and a piece of Ryeowook cookie. “hey, did I miss something? what’s the prize?” he said while ate the cookie.

“oh, um.. yah, we’re here to ask for a prize here.” Hyukjae said.

I stared at Donghae. His face is so uneasy now, so pale.. I swear I never looked him like that.

“yah, what’s it??” I asked impatiently.

 

“ahem.. for the prize… I want a servant.”

Then he cough. “sorry, wrong. WE want servants.” He said again, before letting all of us breath.

 

What?! Servants?? People like us?? That’s just so crazy.

“Ya!! are you kidding?! Servants?? It’s not funny!!” I shouted to him while stood up.

“calm, Youngwoon ah..” Leeteuk whispered to me, making me sat again.

I sighed, then looked at everyone.

Sungmin, Heechul, Kyuhyun, and Ryeowook seems shock while looked at speechless Donghae. Hankyung and Siwon just sighed. Yesung is doing nothing while holding his turtke. My Jungsoo, he looks frustrated.. Damn it!

But I know.. All of us shouldn’t blame Hae. It’s not his fault.

“that’s sounds crazy. You know.” I muttered.

“I’m sorry. It’s our decision.” Hyukjae said again.

 

“who?” Donghae suddenly said, without a sound. But loud enough for us to hear.

 

“Um..” Kibum murmured, “our leader which you, Donghae ssi.”

I almost explode in anger once again, but I know, Donghae already promised he’ll do anything if he lost.

“just me, right?” Donghae said again, still with same expression. I think being a servant is not a big problem for him, but one more servant who is his friend makes him damn worried..

“no, Donghae yah, I’m sorry.. But my vice needs one, too.”

I hold my breath. I can’t angry. I shouldn’t and that’s killing me. But if Kibum which my Jungsoo, I swear I’ll kill them both.

Everyone seems shock with Hyukjae’s words.

“who.. is.. it?” Donghae asked slowly, almost no sound but give pressure in every words he said.

Hyukjae took a deep breath.

“uhm, we’ve discuss about that before.. can it be…”

 

Hyukjae stared at everyone. “Siwon ah?”

 

What? Siwon?? I quickly looked at Siwon. He just raised his brows. Then I stared at Donghae. He looks shock while widened his eyes.

“oh, my…” I heard my Jungsoo whispered in surprised. I was shocked too, but I’m glad it’s not him that they choose. Bad me, I know~

“h-hey.. are you guys sure.. it can’t just one servant?!” Donghae suddenly srood up and yelled, “i.. I’ll be your servant! You two servant, or even all member of Fox servant!” he added.

Aisshh.. I don’t know what to do now, I don’t want Hae to become they servant but.. I don’t want anyone..

“it’s okay,” suddenly someone said.

 

Huh.. Siwon?

“huh??” Donghae stared at him, followed by everyone.

“yeah, I can be your servant.” Siwon said calmly.

Yah, okay.. I know the reason. Siwon is having crush on Hyukjae, I think. And everyone thought that too..

“what the—“

“okay, we’ll wait you at Fox place in 7 minutes. You can ask anything later,” Hyukjae cut Donghae sentence. Then the both of Fox went out. Not long from it, I heard Hyukjae shouting. Yeah, I know all students were curious about the prize and ask them..

But.. I hate how cruel this guy! What’s the good side of him?? I wonder why Siwon likes him.. and.. maybe Hae likes him too..

 


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HYUKJAE POV

 

“we’re back…” Kibum said beside me while we’re walked into Fukuura library.
“hey, welcome back.” Xiah welcomed us.

“how is it, hyung?” Jonghyun asked.

I smiled, “easy.”

“wooww.. so… you’ve already make Donghae.. as your.. Slave??!” Xiah yelled in surprised.

Kibum chuckled, “slave? Wow.”

“hey.. How about you, Kibum hyung? Succeed with Siwon?” Taemin asked Kibum.

“uh.. huh?” Kibum pretends innocent.

“haha.. yeah, he is.” I answered him.

“where..? Whereee? I wanna seeeee themmm..” Xiah now yelling like crazy.

“shut up, you. They’ll come soon.” I said.

Right, 4 minutes later, I heard crowd outside that I know it’s the students, and knocks sounds at library door.

“wait, wait, I’ll open it.” Kibum said.

Suddenly Xiah run, “let me,” he wink. Aisshh!

Then Xiah opened the door.

Omg.. two handsome guy.. They’re coming in.. And they’re mine!! Still I can’t believe it..

“hey,” Xiah greeted them. Sooo flirting!

Siwon and Donghae just nodded after they came inside.

“heeey, don’t be too cold like that! Smile a little.. were the students disturbing you?” Xiah continued, make Siwon and Donghae shook their head, Siwon smiled a bit, but Donghae? He isn’t…

“umm.. Have you know all members of Fox?” I tried to make them speak.

Siwon stared at Donghae. “yes, we are.” Hae said. Did he mad? His expression is so cold..

“who am i?” Minho who was beside Taemin shouted from corner.

“Choi Minho and Lee Taemin. You… Jonghyun, Onew, Xiah, Kibum..” he stared at me, “mo— Hyuk.. Hyukjae.”

My eyes widened. Ahh, I got that! First he want to call me Monkey, then Hyukkie but then he called me Hyukjae. Huh.. If he dare call me like that.. I won’t forget him!!

“good, good.” Xiah smiled.

“uhm,” I muttered. “from today, you two are Kibum’s and My servants.” I said.

“yah, and.. we haven’t decided how long it takes, so…” Xiah said, hang his sentence.

“huh?? So.. We’ll be your servants for long time??” Donghae yelled in protest.

I smiled, “sorry, Promise is promise.”

“we can do that.” Siwon then said in his calm expression, makes Hae raised his brows and stared at him unbelievingly.

“of course,” I said, “from this second, you two are ours.” Then I walked to the couch.

Uhhm.. are those sentence are bad? Did I make Hae mad at me?? I hope not..

Kibum stood up from a single couch.
“umm, Siwon ssi. You’re my servant now, and.. Donghae ssi, you’re Eunhyuk hyung’s. We have a party this evening at Minho’s.. you two will have to accompany us wherever we go, and do whatever we want you to do. And.. don’t forget to pretend as a servant.. because you’re really is. Okay?” he explained.

Donghae just sighed, while Siwon nodded.

 

I took a deep breath, I’ve to try this.

 

“Hae,” I called him slowly without look at him.

 

Oh, he walked to me.

 

“yes, master?”

 


Omo… This is exciting!

 

 

 

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[A/N]: hello everyone~ i think this is a long update. thank you for your comments! it's encouraged me to write more~~~XD

anyone happy with the prize? XD lol there will be many eunhae moments~

and Hae is so in denial... i don't even know why he's like that!! XD kkkk

 

@DredhezReiare u satisfied with the result? kkk~ he's recognizing Hyuk tears! >///w///<

@angelkpopluverbahaha Hae's real stupid -head~~ i thought i made him genius *_* loll~ patient baby XD

@mrslee19HYUK WINS~ Hae only win 1 time.. XD and urwelcome dear! i'm waiting for u to update~~~

@Shanqueenkyaa new reader!! *kiss u* XB thank you for commenting~ keep waiting for the next update neh? kk

@kikiiovesmusic10ahahaha here's the update~ yeah Hae's too genius that's why he's being that stupid XDXD

 

will update soon....~

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najinpi #1
Author nim... Please update soon....
i-eunarahae
#2
Chapter 65: Author-nim TT
PURPLEDREAM_girl #3
Chapter 65: Will you updating this story again,author nim?? I hope you will update again ~~ It's heartbreaking to see they suffer from the misunderstanding....
i-eunarahae
#4
Chapter 65: Author-nim I'm begging you please update:((( it's so hard to see them like that with the trust issue..please make it better back:(
MeinAltire #5
Chapter 65: Wahhh poor hyuk.....
Looking forward for the new chaps...Good luck ^^
noonsmine #6
Chapter 65: miss this story :( plz update
btymbbickeyinspbabyz
#7
Chapter 31: i just happened to read your story. my comments, please kill donghae's dad, yuka, victoria, donghae because of his damn feeling and hyukjae because he's not trying to confess
3dgirl #8
Chapter 64: whaaaat I wanna know what will happen next... plzz I cant handle this. It's just amazing fiction
denisevelazquez
#9
Chapter 65: youre quite an imangitive person i read it for two whold days without sleep. i've finally finished it it's surprising interesting so for i're read a bunch of fanfictions and yours the best out of all the eunhae fanfictions that i've read besides the one with the vampire eunhyuk from a diffrent story with eunhae. Thanks for the story i hope you write more i just cant stop thinking of the next chapter i hope they make up and hyukkie paints his hair back to brown. FIGHTING!
asdayuni #10
Chapter 65: Woow!! Friend you are update!!
I think maybe Hae just don't wanna people see Hyuk like that, because Hae think that Hyuk is his right?
Yeaah, couple ini nggak terlalu terbuka satu dengan yang lain, jadi ribet dehh hubungan mereka -_- but glad you are back!!!