False Perfection

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"First we feel, then we fall." --James Joyce

The society values faction over blood, and switching factions means severing any and all ties to your past life. You'd likely never see your old friends, family, or teachers.

But that's what Do Kyungsoo wanted.

Long before he turned sixteen, Kyungsoo knew that everything he'd known wasn't meant for him. He no longer wanted to play it safe, no longer wished for a massive jumble of letters and numbers flowing on a page, no longer dreamed about a life spent with his nose glued to a book. The day after the society-wide aptitude test was taken, he knew. With his heart pounding, knees buckling, and legs barely holding him up, he made his way over to the circle of five metal bowls and cut his hand, allowing the blood to drip down into the bowl.

A gasp ran through the Erudite faction.

The lit coals sizzled, saying what he couldn't.

Foreword

/awkward laughter/

As some of you may or may not be aware, I'm currently writing two other fanfics. ( I'm not sure when or where either will end. ) The next few months are extremely busy for me. While I'm familiar with the series, having read the first two books and on my way to finishing the third, writing takes time no matter what. Time I don't have currently. I'm finishing up my senior year in high school, but if you're willing to wait a few weeks, I'll try to write well enough so that you find it worth the wait.

Thank you~ ^^

Kaimono
The first chapter is up! Shorter than my usual chapters, but I wanted to get it out before AP exams.

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slackinqueen
#1
Chapter 3: Are you going to name kyungsoo as d.o until the end of this fic???
vanillame #2
OH MY GOD!!!!! I WAS SEARCHING EVERYWHERE KAISOO DIVERGENT!AU AND FOUND THIS!!!!!!!! I love you. Thank you very much for making this au.
Regiusabeow
#3
You need to find a person to make you some art for this story! It's so good!
000001
#4
This is really good! I hope you continue to write it
thegardenofstars
#5
Chapter 2: Wheeeeeee divergent au!!! XD
docryi #6
YESSSSS DIVERGENT AU OMFG YES PLEse yes thank you this is AMAZING THANK YOU ILY <3
sushi-mushi
#7
Chapter 2: Awwww, Lily this was perfect and very much worth the wait (LOL JK, YOU UPDATED THIS SO FAST-- HOW DO YOU DO THAT??)
Is it Dauntless? It is Dauntless, right?
Hehe, the last sentence was GOLD
and yucky-- blood :( (lol, guess who mother nature attacked yesterday) (brb dying)

this was very good (LOL, THIS IS WHY I DON'T COMMENT ON THINGS )
bangchans
#8
Chapter 2: omg omg now this reminds me of the room choices in harry potter. I wonder if his faction will be Dauntless ;u; disappointing the parents ugh i hate when that happens but sometimes we have to disappoint them in order to do what we want to do ;;
sushi-mushi
#9
Chapter 1: Yayy, its updated!
The first chapter is amazingg-- i wonder what clan (is it clan) Jongin is in o.O
haha, this sounds so goodd
sushi-mushi
#10
The lit coals sizzled, saying what he couldn't.
omg
wow
that
is
so
pretty