Forgive Me

Broken Promise
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  (TOP POV)

Me, Jiyong and Youngbae went down to the dance studio where Daesung went some time before. "Hyungs! Your all very late!" Seungri said scolding us.

"Hey we got talking to the new girl!" Youngbae said.

"Oh Sandara noona?" Seungri questioned.

"Dae. She's wonderful!" Jiyong says.

"Shes gonna make me go crazy." Youngbae smirked.

"Wait a second! Your wonderful, you make me crazy." Jiyong said in a tune.

 

He scrambled getting his notebook and pen out jotting down his new song idea.

 

"Can we just get a move on? We need to perfect the routine. Me and Seunghyun have identified the flaws already." Daesung said sitting down on the floor.

 

 

We sat in a circle.

 

 

Basically the only thing wrong was me. I was either out of time in one part or just looked really bad.

 

We went over the dance again and again.

 

"TOP! Wrong way!" Jiyong shouted.

 

I went the correct way.

"TOP you look like you don't fit in! Loosen up!" Jiyong commanded.

"TOP put more effort in!"

"You stick out like a sore thumb! Get into the music!"

"No its, one step then another step then turn!"

 

Jiyong kept shouting the insults making me more angry.

 

He tries to steal my girl then bosses me about no way.

 

"TOP!" He shouted.

We stopped the music.

 

"You know what Jiyong? it. No one is perfect like you so I'm outta here. I'm not doing my best to have it all destroyed. Don't knock on my door when you come in." I say then leave the studio slamming the door.

 

I walked out the building with my hood up. I decided to walk through the city.

 

 

 

 

(Dara POV)

 

I sat on the rooftop of where he promised that we would be together forever. The breeze blew my hair gently as I looked at my ring. I was tempted to throw it and leave but I stayed and just looked at it. "Seunghyun, why did you do this to me?" I s

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playfulkissbof
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I will start reading It today
Sure it will be a great story
yelram327 #2
Chapter 90: 💚
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #3
Chapter 90: Hi authornim! Didn't expect this update. But I want yo thank you for putting effort in thus AU. This thought of this chapter is very mature and very related to what had happened during that time. If in any case, salute to you for being bold in facing one of the darkest times of VIP and Blackjacks in 2016.
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #4
Chapter 89: It's nice to have read another update!! my Tabisan heart!
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #5
Chapter 88: I'm getting ready for the upcoming sad chapters.
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #6
Chapter 87: I am ready for the next chapters.
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #7
Chapter 86: As usual you did your best on this chapter!! Nostalgic indeed.
corea18
#8
Chapter 85: Thank u authornim
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #9
Chapter 84: Thank you for another update!!
Daraxxi_2Ne1 #10
Chapter 83: Loving this family vacation chapter. Yes, my 2nebang heart if full. From releasing a song including Tabi ( the ever gorgeous ), to winning in music shows, to getting as all PAKs and whatever and to 2ne1's Coachella performance. It's a win to us!!