The snowfall of seconds

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This is for the Unreal 2PM challenge and you can also read it on Livejournal.

 

Here's what I was given as inspiration:

Prompt 1: As we approached each other, the noise... around us melted away and we were utterly alone, passing, smiling, holding each other's eyes, floors and walls gone, two people in a universe of space and stars.      
– Stargirl (Jerry Spinelli)
Prompt 2: http://robertnash30.files.wordpress.com/2012/07/light-in-the-dark.jpg
Prompt 3: Fleeting time, broken time

Foreword

Time is broken and Chansung struggles to find his linearity, trying to hold on to fleeting things.

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curseofpandora #1
(On another side note: You're welcome to collect all the typos and lacks of words and put them up on your wall in a pretty frame braided from Chanhair. ;D

I am WAY BEYOND SLEEPY RIGHT NOW DX)
curseofpandora #2
Chapter 1: (PART 4/?)

Yo, ME AGAIN

*kicks Woo for reasons* BE KIND AND HE WILL BE GONE IN NO TIME, BISH!

WHY IS NO ONE TELLING THIS BOY WHAT HE WANTS TO KNOW?! (AND WHAT KIND OF DOOM THIS WILL BRING UPON HIM?!)

CHANSUNG, THINK ABOUT THIS TWICE! DX

It's painful to see his search turn into the sole purpose of his existence. ;_______; <////3

MISS APPEARED <333333333333333

How dare she make my baby sad? ;______________;

The stranger is quite irritating. XD

For reasons. XD

Here we go again with the general WTF about everything. XD

AND THEN THERE COMES CHAN, GOING ALL DOOM ON ME AGAIN ;_____________;

Fighting, Junho. <333

;____________________________: *clings to something*

BABIES!!!

THE LOYALITIY ;_____________________________________;

(they will forever be our lovestruck little s, no? X'''D)

THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE, I AM AFRAID TO READ ON NOW ;___________;

Still afraid, but more curious.

XD Even making fun in a situation like that, seriously <3

The image of them in this situation. ;___________; <3

DAFUQ IS THIS OPEN ENDING?! XD

I like how you ended this, however much I might crave a continuation.

But I really want to know what's on the other side, apart from white, I mean. XD

This was a brilliant fic, making me go through approxmately 95% of my emotional spectrum. ^_^b

I will now go back into space and live as a weeping spacewhale for the time being.

Also: four freaking comments. XD And around what, 7 hours of reading with longer breaks in between?XD

The things you do for a good story. <3

It's past 7am now and this weeping spacewhalepanda is going to sleep now. Goodnight. ;)
curseofpandora #3
Chapter 1: (PART 3/?)

THE DAMNED DESCRIPTION IS SO BEAUTIFUL, I FEEL LIKE WEEPING EVEN MORE! ;_________;

Oh Chanbear. XDDDDDDDDD

Why do I picture Khun as a Sphinx right now?XD

GOSH, THIS SILLY BEAR, EY XDDDDDDDDDDD

*flails because of everything actually XD*

These two forever being so caught up in their own world. <3

How eager he is to find the answer... ;______; <3 *coughsJUNHOcoughs*

Wonderful but dangerous all the same. Ah, my dear doom, do you want some biscuits with your tea? While you wait for your turn, I mean?

OMG, HOW COULD I BE UNAWARE OF BEAUTIFUL LONG CHANHAIR? ;________________;

*foam from the mouth because of the hair * @_________@

What did I say about these wonderful small scale/big scale comparisons? ;____________; <3

I FREAKING LOVE YOU, OKAY? THIS IS SO AMAZING!!! <3

<_< This beetle scene seems so important... >_>

Definite NO to that, Chan. There hasn't. BUT acknowledgement of the problem is the first step towards solving it.

*flails again because of general existence problems*

He's such a lost case, isn't he? ;_______; <3

WILL YOU STOP KILLING ME WITH EVERY SINGLE WORD, JUNHO?! DX

(This fic will be the death of me. I mean this in a good way, okay? DX)

Everything sounds just about reasonable. *nods* *pushes them together*

No eh? >> THAT IS SO ISH, I CANNOT!!! (BUT I APPROVE!)

*dies* This, I, no, this, ugh, why, this, UGGGGGGGGGH DX

;__________________; This is so heartbreaking.

I REPEAT: HEARTBREAKING! ;&;

I am dying of feels here, okay? This IS NOT OKAY: ;_____________;

*shedding actual tears now* There, happy now? ;__________;

This spacewhale is absolute weeping now. Broken beyond repair.

This so painfully beautiful... ;__________;

There's hope? ;&; *doesn't trust that at all*

DON'T YOU GO BEING ALL DOOMY MINJUN, DON'T YOU DARE!!!

NOPE. NOOOOOOOOOPE! DX THIS IS NOT OKAY, I REFUSE TO ACCEPT THAT! ;_________;

THIS WILL NOT TURN OUT THE WAY IT SHOULD DX
curseofpandora #4
Chapter 1: (Bish, I'm back with more XD)

I love his relationship with Taec, btw. So entertaining <3

And now it's time to head in the right direction, Chanbear ;) *cheers*

That's probably like asking him to stop moving altogether, Taec, holy . DX

Oh dear, here you go and hint at the unspeakable. ;_______;

The first meeting, I cry ;____________;

*still crying*

The way he realises how much he's gotten used to some things already... And how wonderous they actually are. <3

His grace *weeping space whale is weeping*

NOOOOOOOOOOO, the hints, not the hints ;__________;

My heart is aching for them already, but happy too. What is this emotional mess, man? >_<

The teasing Chan, though ;____________; <3

Side question: Are there even humans? This timey-wimey mess makes every attempt at defining things so pointless. DX

Ever-changing Junho expressions are so much love. I adore how your made this unstabble situation apparent on such a tiny scale too. <3

Bish, there's only one reason to care about said mundane things... XD

Their first meeting makes me feel all antsy. ;__________;

Taec, you wise guy you. ;______;

This bubble is quite an interesting topic of its own, btw. *_*

Beacon mode *sighs* <3

THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS SO PRECIOUS <3

I'm counting down to the revelation that the asumed SHE is a HE and Taec's reaction to it. XD

Oh damn, TAEC, that was boring. XD

Okay, I take it back, that is the teasing I expected from the troll boss. XD

THERE YOU GO WITH THE HINTS AGAIN. I FEEL DOOM LURKING JUST AROUND THE CORNER. ;____;

DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!! *flails in space*

Did he just diss the Chanbelly?XD MISTER, THAT THING IS A GIFT OF THE HEAVENS!!!

*giggles over the awkwardness*

;___________; Baby <3

*flips Taec* NO! Not okay, this will lead to doom and doom is bad and... *turns into the weeping spacewhale again*

Well, rightfully so, Chan. GO FIND YOUR MAN!!! *cheers for impending doom*

Doom 2.0 :D I think I have an idea who they are. <3
curseofpandora #5
Chapter 1: HERRO WIFEY!!!

Let the commenting begin:

The intro alone gives me chills. I cannot imagine how devastating it must be to live like this. ;____;

Gosh, this is so frightening, yet tempting. *_*

My mind is about to go POOF, okay?

I'm really glad he found some stability in this mess.

It's quite strange to see them in a stable situation somehow. XD
But nice to know, how appreciative they can be of said moment.

PAIN... NOT OKAY! SO NOT OKAY! ;&; Once again the mere thought of being forced to live like this, is killing me. DX

*becomes antsy because of their travels*

MIND: BLOWN.

I REAPEAT: ERROR 404: MIND CANNOT BE FOUND, BECAUSE IT WAS PULLED INTO THE BLACK!

It's starting to make sense... now I'm afraid...

The image of Earth is giving me the creeps, but seems awfully beautiful at the same time.

This is giving me the weirdest kind of headache, okay? Bad, but in a good way.

The comparison, I am crying XDDDDDDDD

WPH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD I love how you introduce them to Chan, btw. <3

Very eloquent way of introducing yourself, Channie XD

I'm really glad he is in good hands now. <3

WPH IS THE MASTER, OHOOOO! (is he hearing drums too? ;3)

Chérie, I notice we made a similar choice of words at one point. XD

The whole eating whatever meal at whatever time seems quite nice, if you have a hole for a stomach, but damned, I would be so full all the time. XD

The two troll hyungs, I can't. XD Even in this weird environment they lost nothing of their attitude. <3

Chapter two of: The weird moment when you understand nothing at all, but it makes perfect sense anyway... :D

LOL at Chan's confidence vs. tree. XD

Oh, bark, yes, I had cocoa in my eye today... XD

So interesting to see him with his new found toy (the travelling abilities) <3

It's kinda painfully to see that most people were too weak to cope with their new situation, but good to have some how prevailed despite everything. :S

Forever bulldozing everything. XD Be it trees, or people or dimensions...
paper-hearts #6
Chapter 1: Am I supposed to post here or LJ? It will go here so you can keep track. But gotta say:

This is amazing, extravagant sweetsweat!!!!!!! Blew me away. The style, the plot, how you dealt with the challenge.
But while reading this I had this heartbreak for them, for their fate. It was literally reading and my heart breaking, and tell me now woman if I was supposed to feel this way?!?!

“I wish it's the moment I wake up in sun and you're still sleeping.” I CRY ;______;
So beautiful. Wanted more of them because they were so epic and beautiful and meant to be. GAHHH *frustrated*
There were many other moments I wanted to highlight here and savor it later but ugh read it on my ipad and commenting on ipad is no good. Anyway, AHHH. loved this ♥︎ ♥︎ ♥︎
LlyaAegi #7
Chapter 1: Wow. Just...wow.

This was amazing! I have always admired your style of writing but this one really blew me away. Time is an interesting concept in and of itself. And I loved near the end, talking about that one moment you would want to be frozen in forever.

My brain is still digesting this story, beautiful and powerful all at once. <3 I am so glad you wrote this!!! <3
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