Chapter 6: You did well on the story i liked it..it made many emotions on me while reading..your choice of words is also great it expresses the story flow/line really well..i dont find any wrong wd your way of making a stiry..just continue and keep up the good work...

hi there. ^^ i just want to tell you that i recommended your story on my shop. http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/424737/3/

hope you don't mind. i'm sorry for the lame shoutout. >.< i'm just not good with words.

Chapter 6: When a fanfic makes me bawl and sobs a river, that must be good. And your ff just did.

Chapter 7: i read 10080. it's a good read but imho your story is wayyyyy better than 10080. i'm not sure about anterograde tomorrow though. your story is already good enough for me but go ahead. and my exams end tomorrow i can't freaking wait. oh and fighting! ^^

Chapter 6: this story is just beautiful in many ways. i can't even describe it in words. the way you wrote your chapters and stringed the words are really, really great. i could feel the sadness and emotion of longing and how strong the bond between the two brothers. it's hard to find good stories with a theme like this. people usually would go for romance. i am absolutely in love with this piece. the ending is so heartbreaking and it brought tears to my eyes, i couldn't stop crying. the beauty of the plot and your writing just made the story perfect. thank you so much for writing this.

This story is so good that it sent many readers to tears. Yes, I cried. One thing that I liked in this story was that it was different from other fanfics. This story showed how deep a brother could love. You have the skills! Omgee. XD

Chapter 6: I really love this fic. It was a great story.