The 13th Time

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After the 13th try, he finally did it. He created the perfect being in the image of himself and the others. The Creator created a human after the 13th time. But what about the other first 12 tries? He's created many strange beings in hopes of them being perfect. But it was not so.

No one could match up to the love the Creator had for the human. For that, the other 12 creatures are resentful towards humans. Throughout the centuries, the 12 creatures preyed on humans. A small handful accepted the inferiority but nevertheless, the humans were the most loved. As human civilization grew, times changed. The humans grew cocky and no longer accepted the 12 creatures into society. They were hunted out and massacred. Many escaped and now, they lie hidden. Hating with a jealous fire, these creatures are outdone by humans' sheer numbers.

The Creator saw what his love did to the perfect being. He must undo his mistake. Now is the perfect time to do so. 

Foreword

The Creator decided to reincarnate the first 13 creatures into this modern world. They shall all change the world. All being forced to cope with one another, they must face the challenges of not only themselves  but of a danger that goes beyond the Earth's bounds. 

Xiumin was the first creature. A wendigo, made of a frozen heart and so, is able to manipulate the cold, who devours the flesh of humans – consuming their greed.

Luhan was the second creature. An elf with pointed ears and heightened senses, can manipulate the enviornment, the elements of nature, with a simple hand wave destroying all sense of human's control.

Kris was the third creature. A dragon whose wings cast intimadating shadows amongst the earth, the sheer might of the clawed beast – humans cower away their pride in this creature's sight.

Suho was the fourth creature. A mercreature with an enticing voice and an even more seductive appetite, leading humans to their death  obstructing their views with overbearing lust.

Lay was the fifth creature. A unicorn that gallops with purity and innocence and reason, a majestic creature that leaves people in wonder – until all hope for the human race is lost.

Baekhyun was the sixth creature. A basilisk, a reptilian creature who can take away the light in anyone's eyes with a simple stare – to wander in addicting habits is to take the path of this killer. 

Chen was the seventh creature. A thunderbird with the ability to create a storm with a blink of an eye, with lightning and thunder and torrents of rain – a man's rage is nothing to this monstrous being. 

Chanyeol was the eight creature. A phoenix, whose tears heal and finds itself caught in a neverending cycle of fire and ash, flies with strength – a human is most distracted with the playfulness of this fiery bird. 

D.O was the ninth creature. A baku, a nightmare-devouring creature that is a hybrid of humble but mighty creatures (elephant, ox, and tiger) – the only thing worth protecting in humans are their imaginative dreams.

Tao was the tenth creature. A werewolf with a curse upon its head and a malevolent, destructive nature – an exact mirror of human's aggression towards themselves and other creatures.

Kai was the eleventh creature. A griffon, a hybrid of three different kings of the animals (lion, eagle, and horse), soars and hunts with ease – determination seems naught with this creature who hardly tries hard.

Sehun was the twelfth creature. A vampire, who burns in the sunlight with silver as a cruel enemy, stalks the human's blood – feeding off their memories, their secrets and their deepest wishes.

Jinae was the thirteenth creature. A human of the simplest needs: food, water, shelter and affection – also filled with the desire to know all there is to know, otherwise known as undying curiosity.


You read it this far! Yay, hello! This is my second fanfic! I hope you all enjoy this fantasy fanfic that I had conjured up. ^^;;

To keep things in check: yes, I know EXO but I don't nearly know them as much as EXOtics or EXO stans do. So, please, bear with me.

Because there are 13 major characters, I am not going to introduce them all at once. They shall come sporadically, entirely dependant on the plotline.

I am here to let you know that I don't plan to pair the female OC up with anybody. As you can see, I loosely (but very, too) based her on Pandora from Greek mythology and that is the only reason she is female. I originally planned on bringing a male OC into the story but I couldn't get a guy to fit into the shoes I wanted him to. 

I may have popular pairings and such, but that is not confirmed, lol. So I won't put any in the tags. But when I do see that it is inevitable, you'll see a change of tags. 

Poster and background, as well as the character chart, was done at Rockstar Graphics Shop!


 

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AsCherries
#1
Chapter 10: I don't really unterstand everything there is to understand but I just love it to bits.
The concept is awesome and their personalities... I think you can work on them a lot, it gives you so much to think and write about, it's amazing.
So many things to think about!
I'm going to keep reading this...
moonyuki
#2
Chapter 9: Haha...Jinae's hair tho >,< and wow ~ baku?? cool man - Yuki
xiuminbaozi99
#3
Chapter 8: Xiumin is adorable, and Thunderbird eh? Thats cool! Author nim, update quicker or else I'll forget the story line again ><
lecolo #4
Chapter 8: Hey there *waves*
I just found your story and to be honest I'm truly amazed from this idea and your writing style! It's really good and I'm looking forward to the following chapters.
I really like your choice of creatures and their personality and I can't wait for the others.
So I hope you'll update soon!
See you ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
crazedfan #5
Chapter 6: I love love love this. Your sntences are very very perfect. I love the concept. I love the way you put them in different places. I love the way you use their symbols. I love it. I have full respect towards you. Keep writhing author-nim. I'll support you in any way i can :)
xiuminbaozi99
#6
Chapter 5: I have a feeling they ARE going to end up living with each other...
annoyme521
#7
Chapter 3: Author-nim I'm sorry I haven't been able to comment yet on this story, but here I am now! This is a great concept and I'm excited to see where it goes! I'll be looking forward more of your updates!

You're doing a great job so far! Fighting!!!!!!
ultrablue #8
Chapter 3: Oooh! This is such a cool concept. I love it!
xiuminbaozi99
#9
Chapter 3: O.m.g. feels everywhere o_O
xiuminbaozi99
#10
Chapter 2: Ohhhh i Like this, it’s cool how they’re all different types of creatures unlike the usual werewolf theme :)