Saving it on my subscription and will read it later. It's already 2 in the morning in my side of the world so I'll tell you what I think about it later but judging from your subscribers, it's good^^

First comment: I like your description. it draws readers to take a closer look :)

Chapter 2: I legitimately cried whilst I was reading this. How do people even write angst without breaking down? It was beautifully written and laid out.

Chapter 1: crying so bAd
yIxing u fcking jerk in this ff
ihy yixing tho ur ma bias orz
wHyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
jongdAaaaAAAe

Chapter 1: Beautifully written. It was almost like I enjoyed having my heart ripped out.

Chapter 1: Awwww my poor baby Chen
T_T
Yixing Ur such a jerk in this

Chapter 1: Oh my....poor Jongdae ;A;
I kinda wanna know if Yixing felt guilty after all or really is heartless...just as his friends

Chapter 1: uhuhuhuhuhhuuuhuhuuuu~ this is so sad! i cried! D':

Chapter 1: Well frick-- OUR LITTLE CHENCHEN WHAT HOW WHY LIKE WOAH ZHANG YIXING YOU STOP RIGHT THERE--

(That was really beautiful, in a sense that my emotions were all over the place. I was squealing when I read about them getting together then I started doing the clicky fingers + gurl you did not!!! when I discovered the truth kdkdjdkskdksdkkdkdkdjdlskd thanks for writing this, soulmate <3)

Chapter 1: my chenchen.. :-( yes he always smile..always joy jongdae.. cannot imagine if he never smiled again..

omg chenlay..update soon..