The Sacrifice *HIATUS*
Description
“ We cannot beg someone to stay if they want to leave and be with someone else.
We have to admit that love doesn't give us the license to own a person.
This is what love means...
Sacrifice ”
The Sacrifice is a sad love story of how Kyungsoo was willing to let go of her loved one for the sake of his happiness although it was truthfully hurtful.
Do Kyung Soo was a gender dysphoria patient. She was born completely resembling an elementary school boy. She was quite short, only stuck with 148 cm in height. People would mostly have mistaken her as a ‘he’. Despite her boyish appearance, Kyungsoo still had the same feelings like normal females had. Her dream was to get married and build a happy family with her husband. However, due to her disease, it had affected her reproductive system in which making the percentage of her getting pregnant was only 10%.
Kim Jong In was Kyungsoo’s husband. When the people who knew Kyungsoo were trying to avoid her because they assumed her as an abnormal girl, Jongin was the one who dared to get to know her more deeply. He had fallen in love with her uniqueness and personalities, and that was what making him decided to make her as his forever. Just like Kyungsoo, Jongin also wanted to build a family. He knew there was only a thin hope for Kyungsoo to get pregnant and they might be barely had a child, but he didn’t want to make an adoption. He strictly wanted to have a child of his own.
Jessica Jung was Jongin’s secret lover. The couple met again three years after Jongin and Kyungsoo got married.
Kim Min Seok was someone that Kyungsoo got to know unexpectedly. He was the new CEO of his family’s company (Avenue Company), replacing his late father’s position.
Oh Se Hun was Minseok’s cousin and Jongin’s workmate. He was someone whom Kyungsoo had gotten to know unexpectedly also.
Foreword
A/N: I started to think to write this story as I got an inspiration from someone. This is a sad angst love story. You guys might need to prepare lots of tissues (only if I succeeded to make you guys cry when reading it. Hahah). As you can read above, I wrote Kyungsoo as the gender dysphoria patient. If and only if you guys were hardworking enough to search the info about the disease and find out that the way I made Kyungsoo to suffer with the disease isn't really accurate with what the patient of that disease is supposed to be like, I beg your pardon. I just used the name of the disease and how I made Kyungsoo to suffer from it is based on my own made up situation. Hehe. Hope you guys understand that. I do not own any of the pictures I used in this fic. Credit to the owners ^^
So, I've got my story to be reviewed.
1. I've made the request at JUST 4 FUN Request Shop by Miro-Chan. I scored 74%. Here's my request. You can click it here ^^ Thanks to my designer also for making such beautiful poster and background :) Credit to the shop! ^^
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I really enjoyed this story alot, I managed to read the full thing without closing it out of frustration and I think this story has alot of potential to get featured onto the front page.
2. Another request is from Loading Your Imagination Advertisement & Review shop! by Gracelamluvsuju. I scored 86%. Here's my request. You can click it here ^^ Credit to the shop! ^^
Reviewer's note:
Frankly speaking, this was so far the third genderbender fan fiction which caught my utmost attention, and made me interested in reading it; and among all the other genderbender genre-d fan fictions I've reviewed, this was so far one of the 2 best ones! And ever since I read the description was Kyungsoo and Kai in the foreword, I knew that this I just had to give a high mark for this piece of writing! And if it weren't for those minor mistakes which you've made in grammar and some punctuations, you could have gotten an A* if your content range was more widened! This is really a good story that has potential in it, and I think that even non-genderbender readers would be interested, just like me. I suggest you that if you have time, try to read-over some those chapters and edit them a bit; be it change your minor grammar mistakes, fill up your commas at the right spaces or widening your cotent's range. Then, it'll definitely be more perfected! I look forward to your future works, or any request which you would like to apply here! ^v^
3. My third request if from Hyde Advertisment and Review Shop by littleedeeer. This shop doesn't give grade and I kinda like it. Comments are all positive. Hhehe. You can click it here. Credit to the shop! ^^
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