Gay.......

Ranting & Raving
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Why is it that if one character in your story is gay, everyone else has to be gay also? If Zico's gay, why can't just Zico be gay?

Why is Taeil also gay? And U-kwon!? And B-Bomb!? And Kyung!? And P.O !?!? Everyone is gay. Gay, gay, gay!

Why is everyone paired up? And if it's uneven, you drag in Jay Park? Is Jay the go-to gay?

And why can't Zico be run-of-the-mill gay? Does he really have to be an absolute flamer? I mean, I get that you wanted him to be a bottom in the story, but sheesh. You've written him so gay that he could do a parade by himself and no one would miss the floats.

Furthermore, why is the entire population of your story male? Are there seriously no females? Not even a few Fruit Flies hanging around?

Oh! And why are all the gay guys on the same floor of the apartment building? Are they quarantined so the gay doesn't spread? I don't get it.

Why are they in South Korea and there is no resistance to their lifestyle? Come on, there's a bigot in every bunch. I promise.

 

 

(I am not homophobic or anti-gay in anyway. On a good year, I can hit a PRIDE festival in at least 4 cities. I wear rainbows from head to toe, hunty. I'm not saying anything derogatory about homouals, I'm talking about the people who write about them. Especially the females that write about them.)

 

I feel like (especially to the little 13 year old girls who have no real concept of what they're

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Baekhyunsoul
#1
Chapter 20: I can only wish more people would use beta readers, especially if you are putting all this work into something that obviously means something to you. It only makes sense, if you’re in a rush to publish and don’t have the time time put it away to reread later when you’re not so close to it, then use the fresh and objective eyes of beta reader. Thank you for putting that out there
Baekhyunsoul
#2
Chapter 20: I can only wish more people would use beta readers, especially if you are putting all this work into something that obviously means something to you. It only makes sense, if you’re in a rush to publish and don’t have the time time put it away to reread later when you’re not so close to it, then use the fresh and objective eyes of beta reader. Thank you for putting that out there
meowzwrites
13 streak #3
Chapter 26: Omg yes @ mpreg just please stop
meowzwrites
13 streak #4
Chapter 14: Lol @ 16. I do idol fics, and I used to give characters with very little training in one area really strong twins but now I just want to punch myself and everyone who does that in the face.
haaitje
#5
Your rants and ravings are so very informative. I will revisit it when I have/find the motivation to write again. I agree with most of your opinions about the stories on AFF. I have to say I like reading your stories, I like your characters and how you "build" them. I could care less if they were black, white, purple or whatever color; race or ethnicity, I like them for who they are. How they develop. And of course their background is an important part of that but I don't think their color is key. I hope that you get what I mean, it's difficult to explain without seeing your reaction ^^. You asked about angsty stories and I just read a lot of angst stories by the same author. The stories were compelling and I couldn't stop reading them but I also thought that it was a bit too much. Too much pain and heartache never any form of relieve for the characters. I felt drained after reading their stories back-to-back, no matter how interesting I found the stories. I contemplated telling the author that, how I felt about the stories but I was to chicken to actually do it. After reading your R&R I decided to tell them anyway. It's upbuilding criticism and not a bashing. Thanks again for your insights and keep writing these interesting funny and heartwarming stories. Who doesn't want to be Luna, I sure wanted to be. ^^
PrinceOfAbstraction
#6
Chapter 35: A good story will have one or more of the following - good plot/interesting characters/attractive writing style/inexplicable something that makes you relate to the story at once.
NeoCaratTypo #7
Chapter 32: I’m CHOKING I’m pretty sure that chpt 31 (Consistency) was my story ? I specifically remember thinking that it was so innovative. I hated that decision too after writing two chapters because It got so tiring to write. I do still like the concept of the story so I’m thinking of revisiting it. Hopefully I don’t make the same mistake ?
milkia
#8
i've honestly read this through several times and i still can't get over how good this guide is. guide/rant, anyway. i love it, thanks for posting!
MinhosAegyo
#9
Chapter 41: girl i've been off this site for years (was in like middle school when i created my account) and i come back out of curiosity (now graduated from high school) and you still spilling hot fiery teaaaa. love it. now let me go catch up on your stories cause i remember them being bOMB!