NOTE - Outtake!

The Doctor and the Pirate

Hi!!

As promised, I have written the Yixing/Joonmyun first-time scene! You can find it here.

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Rb2012 #1
I was looking for the story. Glad i found it again.
INFTJazm
#2
Chapter 5: you write so eloquently!!!!
Angelini
#3
Chapter 4: The story was so sweet aww

Ironically, I came online to take a break from my studies on diseases dynamics and end up reading about Malaria which is first up in my notes, so I should give a thanks for letting me study and take a break at once lol
Aeshi_Satska #4
Hello, I do not know how everything is arranged here, so I will say here. I read your works on one Russian site, I just want to say that they are cool. Just live forever love you very much
Спасибо ❤️❤️❤️
RedLuck
#5
Chapter 5: First of all, I cannot imagine how much loss I might been have if I didn't discover this woderful fic. Words can't exactly describe my thoughts on how amazing and well-written this fic is and how much I learn to love it. I love your writing style. All of it. I love the new knowledge I have came across on this fic. I've learned many words and information that I think more than the number of what I learned in my English class and Science classes. You're such a great writer. The pacing of the story is so good. The plot. ALL parts of the story are so beautifully crafted I might cry. Thank you for writing this. This is one of the greatest SuLay fanfic I've ever come across and would probably stayed there forever. I love this. I really adore SuLay as well as Kaisoo and the thought of the possibility that I will never get to read this fic again in the future haunts me(I've seen many of fanfic writers taking down their great fanfics long or not long after they posted it). My heart would be in so much sorrow if that happens.
Again, thank you for writing it. You are truly a blessing and I love you for that ?
mistymountains 193 streak #6
Nice story!
ChoiGurl1187
#7
Chapter 5: This was great!!
CHANBAEK-coupleGOALS
#8
Chapter 6: Ok, one of my favorite fics of all time, seriously
Made me cry, of anguish and utter happiness, what a damn masterpiece

I love the realism, that really makes this fic so real and exciting, and I swear I LIVE for this relationship
Their confession on the hill was adorable, and the way they both fall for eachother as the other is on the brink of death, it’s just beautiful
I swear, I’m in love with this fic

The pirate concept was so so well written, honestly kudos to you
Thank you for this masterpiece ❤️
BR_exo
#9
Chapter 5: OMG my favourite Sulay fanfic it is now! I LOVE IT!!!!!! The whole journey and the plot and everything was PERFECT! I love Suho's character here! I always wanted to read something telling about him being very strong and muscular because he is in real life! But I don't know why people forget about it. So thank you very much for writing this! I love pirate au more now! XD but specially if you write it because you're the best at this! Thank you!!!!!!! <3
Woooohpeasants342 #10
Chapter 6: "He's my plunder for this adventure" booiiiiiii yall best believe that i was screaming cos that was cute af. Ajdjgkldleallfn this was soooo good i loved it so much!