The Weapon Master's Son

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Hansol is an unloved prince, while Byungjoo is loved by all. They don't get along, at first...then are forced to work together. There are many things for each of them to learn. There's a secret in the kingdom...

This is the land of Rotieva, where magic is used by the rich and powerful and the countries are strong because of it. Every kingdom is envious of the next country's power and magic. 

However, none is more feared and respected than the country of Alertesia. While it is a small country, they own the Crimson Sword. It is said to be the most powerful sword in the land, and anyone that has come across it in battle has died by merely being touched by it. It's the sword of death. As you all know, even the most powerful people and objects have their downfalls. The Crimson Sword must be charged in the Waters of Crystal every ten years. It was charged two years ago, but has somehow lost its power. No one must know of this, outside of the kingdom. It will need to be taken the the Waters soon, or all will be lost. It will take a very special person to take it, since there are only a few people who can even touch it. 

The task has been given to the young prince, Hansol, who is unloved by even the King and Queen. He knows that they want him to go so that they may be rid of him. He is certain that this is the case,because he may not have the power to touch it, once it is recharged with power. 

That is why the Weapon Master's Son will go with him, along with their guard. It will be a dangerous journey, and they must travel as peasants, to keep all suspicion off of themselves and the sword. 

If they do not restore the sword, all will be lost in the kingdom and Prince Hansol will never have the chance to prove that he is worthy of recognition and love. All will be lost, and he will still be second to the Weapon Master's son.

Foreword

 

I want to thank Ching a Ling Graphics for my beautiful, new poster. Here's a link to the shop: 

I would like to thank Infinitum Advertisement Shop for advertising this story for me:). Here's a link to their shop.

I woul also like to thank Pay It Forward Multi Review Shop for the review they did for me:D.

 This story is entered into the 7th Sense Writing Contest

Disclaimer

The names of Topp Dogg and any other idols mentioned are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this fictional work. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^