So...um...this was originally written in Spanish for obviously my Spanish class back when I was a sophmore in high school. I translated the entire story into English so need to worry about that. I'm not the greatest author out there and writing is not my thing, but this is pretty decent. This is my first fanfic ever so please comment and...um constructive criticism is accepted, but please not hate comments like "oh this " and stuff like that. Oh and thank you for taking the time to read my fanfic :)