Chapter 7: i miss kwang soo nowadays so i go back to this trilogy once in a while. :’)

the first fanfic that i read and wow....its really good

Chapter 11: God this was so sweet! And I love your dialogue by the way, you can who is speaking to whom just based on the tone and words alone. And GS's mom is both endearing and funny (pish posh! Mary Poppins ref?, you're a married couple ofc you were having , you know you can't have a healthy baby if you are not eating enough) idk I found this hilarious.

And the last scene does definitely feel like an ending, I can imagine the last episode of a drama with a fading music outtro and a warm light and the camera slowing down for a it, it's a warm feeling! You're a great writer

Thank you very much for making this story❤❤❤. I'm waiting for the next Kwangmong story?

I miss this fanfic :’) I’ve read this series more than I have read anything in my life. Thank you so much, author-nim. <3

Chapter 11: And so it ends!

This chapter was so wholesome and sweet I think I got diabetes :D Haha but in a good way. Good diabetes.

Trust you to put the happy couple through the most embarrassing situation you can think of! It was really funny to imagine them panicking and scrambling for cover. I would've thought the mother would've just brushed it off being all mature and wise and cheeky. But she was flustered too!

I love the last line you ended on. It perfectly finishes off this long journey Kwang Soo has been on, from unrequited love to happiness and fulfillment. And I like how you included everyone in the final scene, including Hyo Joo, Eun Soo and Fang. It's a great setting to end it all on, the entire family together in a warm and cosy home. Sooooo wholesome!

I do feel that the end was a little abrupt, though? It just felt like it was continuing at the regular pace - describing the scene with some dialogue as per normal - and suddenly ended on that great last line.

I'm imagining like a LotR finale with the room glowing with warm light, the camera panning around to everyone happy; maybe show Kwang Soo's face laughing uproariously at a joke that can't be heard due to the music, then settling into a gentler and softer smile as he looks over at his family. The camera takes his point of view as Ji Hyo smiles lovingly at him from the corner of the screen, and the camera pans away from her to the mum and sister washing up and chatting happily. The camera continues panning to Hyo Joo chasing Fang and squealing with glee as he her face. Then the camera comes back around to focus on Kwang Soo and his expression is now one of gratitude and bliss as he realizes he is the luckiest guy in the world. It ends with the camera pulling back on the whole family enjoying the evening of love and laughter.

Erm... so yeah... I don't know how you can describe that in words in the story! Hahaha. But that's just what I was feeling. I dunno, perhaps in the last paragraph cut back on the dialogue and focus on Kwang Soo's thoughts and feelings, or an inner monologue of his? That way when it ends on a reflective and blissful note it already had some build up to it?

Just my two cents! Loved the chapter anyway as always and it's a lovely way to finish this journey we've been on with Kwang Soo.

Congratulations on finishing it Reggie!!! Wooooo :D

Chapter 11: The new chapter warms my heart :’)

The plot of this story is good. I think the idea of having chapters intended to show how LKS is a father to Ji Hyo's daughter and their future children is a good one. It would be nice to read how their married life would be when they have more children to take care of.

Chapter 10: Wait wait wait... they had FIVE rounds that night?!?! Good god...

You know how Darryl calls Rick Grimes' daughter "Little Asskicker"? I think we should nickname Hyo Joo "Little er". What do you think? I think it's suitable!

I love the way Kwang Soo looked at his wardrobe and liked how it was filled with her clothes. That must be a lovely feeling, although I can only imagine it. Sigh. It's really a profound moment, I feel :)

It's also quite touching to see obviously how much care they feel for each other in . From wanting to give him something he'd never had before, to feeling concerned about hurting her even though he was in the throes of pleasure, it's really sweet :)

Y'know Reg I really must marvel at how good you're getting at writing !!! How on earth do you know so much about men's manhoods??? Where the sensitive parts are, all the ridges and veins, the bulbous head, etc? Unless someone's been doing research methinks she has some dark history she has been keeping secret! Hehehehe

But I'm calling bull on how fast he regenerated in time for Round 2! Only a few seconds had passed! :O

And that cliffhangar...! Brilliant way to end the chapter hahahah. Dare I guess that it's Little er? Or the the mum???

Thank you for the update :’)