This was touching, thank you for writing it~ :')

Chapter 1: Forgot to add that I liked your subtle reference to FRH. ;)

<3 4 boys, 4 seasons, 4ever <3 (//shot for making such a bad pun XD)

Chapter 1: You little sneak!

You wrote this and didn't tell anyone? How dare you? XD Lol, I'm kidding, jie. ;)

It's really good. Really sad, but really good. May I suggest something? The beginning/middle is clearly a flashback, right? While the very last line is present-day? Next time, use italics for flashbacks - this lets the reader know that the particular event(s) happened in the past, and that sets it apart from the present. :) Just a tip, for future reference.

And aww, it's complete? But... :(

I guess it's up to the reader's imagination whether MiMi wakes up or not, then? Okay...

Good job, jie! ^^