Beginning from the Last Moment

Description

When Donghae was warned in his dream that his love might leave him soon, he started bugging Hyukjae a lot.

Foreword

“Hyukjae? Hyukjae!” He keeps calling as he run around the dorm, searching for him. He soon finds Hyukjae in the toilet with his hands on his zipper.

 


 

written for: Karma's First One-shot Contest

'prompts' to be included:

Character: Youngjae (BAP)
Genre: Romance
Thing: MP3 player
Line: "Don't eat so much, you'll get fat."
Event: Watching a movie

Author's note: Trying hard to include some comedy here and hopefully be able to finish this on time T_T

Writing process: I failed badly on the comedy part and it was fun to write since it's EunHae^^ I tried to make it longer... Still need to improve a lot on my writing. /runs off/
 

poster by: THEPENDRAGON
reviewed by: LightningBender at Lightning Bender Reviews

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yolohyuk
#1
Chapter 1: sweetheart omg why dont they end up together ??? kinda expected it to be longer but you have another plan @.@ will they end up together?? pls make sure this two being a couple ok youngjaeah?! thanks for sharing~
Fan_of_Karma
#2
Chapter 1: That was just sooo cuuute xD Really, making Youngjae into a fairy... xD
m_cupcake
#3
Chapter 1: No it's not ;ams at all ... and I want a sequel pleaaase~ why do I sound like a child asking for a candy!??
Whatever .. thank you for the hard working ^^
fufufufu25 #4
Chapter 1: Eh... this is finished already? Would u mind doing a sequel? Or maybe turn this one to a chaptered fic since it definitely has the potential~ but, its really up to u thou.. just a suggestion ^^
reizuki_aira
#5
Chapter 1: this is cute..!
and not finish yet :P
yeay for sequel..! :D
MisuStar
#6
Chapter 1: aww... these dumbos. LOL
A sequel will be cool^^
narcissistic_draym
#7
Chapter 1: Sequel please xD
EunHae9393 #8
Chapter 1: ahahah this is so cuteeee... and wow actually youngjae is a fairy XD
please make the sequel authornim, i wanna read when eunhae become an actual couple ^^
m15LEE #9
Chapter 1: Sequel please!!!!
FishyPali
#10
Chapter 1: aww.. so cute<33. A sequel would be good ^^