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Description

Donghae, father to many chickens, makes a friend at a very important time in his life.

Foreword

Pairing: kid!EunHae
Rating: PG
Genre: Fluff, Angst

a/n: I've decided to just leave this as is. It was originally a story I wrote a long time ago just for fun. So, I think I will leave it as a one-shot without trying to make it too complicated. Maybe in the future I'll revisit it as a verse. 

 

sujulojo
Making it a oneshot because I can \o/

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sugar_snow
#1
Chapter 1: ooo I'm so curious what is going to happen~ I really love Donghae's bubbly personality ^^
ji682a #2
Chapter 1: It's tagged as completed !?anyway i enjoyed reading it ^^ lil donghae is the cutest oh thanks for writing it tho i want to know what will happen with his father and all .
saphirebluefish #3
Chapter 1: This is a one shot??? Really?? Because i wanna read more. This is such a beautiful story. The characters are simple yet complex.....this is a really really really nice story. Please do continue it.
Caracola
#4
Chapter 1: I know this was an oneshot but I would wish it wasn't. I've already commented, but anyway I am happy because reasons :)
SnowyK
#5
Chapter 1: I really like this! It's an interesting idea and I love that we're starting off with them as kids. I wasn't expecting full deafness so it was curious for me! I like how open and friendly Donghae is and I loved the chickens, especially details like not eating in the coop. I wonder what'll happen to Donghae's dad (and the chickens.) You did a good job with this and I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^^
Caracola
#6
Chapter 1: I don't know if I should love you already!
But I don't know yet since I do know you are going to make me cry!
Why?
Because you can, I know that too.
You are kind of amazing you know? Like I don't know what is it? maybe your food? maybe you live into a fantasy place and you see all kinds of things come together to play? because I don't know how you could create some new world and make that this two fit perfectly fine into it!
Maybe it's something you eat. What do you eat? Maybe if I eat it too my brain cells could do just a little of the work yours do!

Anyway, I love so much when Donghae and Hyukjae are toothly babies (I see an Eunhyuk over there and got confused, lol) I love how casual they beging being friends with each other and yet how cautious Hyuk could be. Donghae is not cautious and that makes me giggle because he is just as adorable as he can be with all he has.
I hate his dady's dad. Even for the real one because that one is the most painful wound that Donghae is carry on within in and I can't do anything to help it. Nothing. Anything at all.
You know, I know that this is just a little bit inspired by EunHae's MV. But is not at the same time because in there you could see Hae suffering and Hyukjae being happy, cute, adorable.
And now is the opposite.
And I can't wait to know how this is going to be.
I know. I have to be patiente. I will try my best. Like, I don't know, make a knot with my fingers to abstein to write over here everytime I pass by (because I will) and re-read over and over again.
I just loved so so so much my otp and people who is talented, like you.
mrsjellyfishielurve
#7
Chapter 1: eunhae as kids always so sweet and so lovable. thank you for writing a story about special children.
strawberrymyeolchi
#8
Chapter 1: this au and this aesthetic and these precious precious children. this would be good and original and interesting even without hyukjae's hearing impairment, but it's extra interesting with that factored in. god this was so feelgood and cheery and then i saw the word ambulance and nearly cried. these characters are so lovable and relatable already which is a good thing but also ): papa lee....
nefkay
#9
WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO TO ME ???? KILL ME ????? GAHHHH ,, PLEASE STOP WITH ALL THIS BEFORE I REALLY GO CRAZY WITH THIS OVER AGAIN !!! Lol , why r u changing it huh ????? My feelings ,, aghhhhh , so ufffff TT