Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Hi AK :) Thanks for the update. I like where this is going. I also hope Jess and Louis will come to terms with their true feelings...whatever it may be. Hope to read your next chapter soooonnnnn :P
Got your message from my site and I too wish you a very Merry Christmas Day. I logged on to the computer after my Christmas Eve dinner and was delightfully surprised to see the new update ... like a midnight dessert :P Thanks.
Chapter 7: Hmmm.....it's been almost 10 years since the divorce - In Chapter 1, it seems he was still single. Either he has been totally submerged in his career which kept him from analyzing his 'emotional' life or Jessica got really pissed with him for not fighting to keep his marriage alive :P But I'm just looking at this from the point of view of how you started the story :))) ... there could be something there you are going to reveal later...if so, I sure hope Louis doesn't get involved with some other woman or 'women' before realizing it was Jessica all along. Ah...that is if you are in the mood of a happy LJ ending :P ... just teasing you. Oh btw, if he does, you got to give him a kick in the , okay? Especially when Jessica never got married all these years. I can't wait to read more.
Chapter 6: just want to be clear I just read your story and I love it ...Louis married Lydia and had a kid she at 4th birthday Jessica realised Louise was neglecting his wife and kid...but at 1st chapter you said that Louis and Lydia divorced after 2 years.....am i wrong..got to re read it again..please update if you are free.
Hi AK :) Still writing? I hope so ;P I've finally finished The Striking Valentine and am taking a break for now. So I'm looking fwd to reading your story :)
Chapter 6: Hmmm.....I guess Jessica still have feelings for him though he was married...maybe a different kind of feelings??? Or is she in denial to bawl her eyes out like that at the end of the chapter. Where does Jessica live now? Surprised she was a tour guide, thought she was a guest. Thanks for the update ;)
Chapter 5: Such a warm chapter and I can see how hard it will be when Louis and Lydia divorce. Daniel looks cute :) - like the reference to the dimples. I can imagine him looking like Louis' baby picture that I saw on the Internet. Thanks for the update :) Looking fwd to more :)
Chapter 4: My heart is breaking already ... so sad for Louis :( - somehow the wedding scene brings back images of the last scenes in DIF IV. But I don't understand how he can still have such strong feelings for Jessica and yet date Lydia...oh well, men!!! He better grow up soon and become a worthy character for Jessica - she's such a strong character here, she's either got over her feelings for him or she is a true 'buddy' who sticks closer than a brother :P - Make Louis sweat for her :)))) My favorite line in this chap = "I'm handsome enough!" hahaha - don't think the 'real' Louis would ever say that - but I like it. Here are my questions:
1. It seems Lydia is already suspicious of Louis' feelings for Jessica when he requested her to be the best man, is that right?
2. Did the diamond tennis bracelet cost more than the engagement ring? :o
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