The one in the bus

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Soo, hello there. First time here actually. I've made an acc just to keep up and comment on my favorite fics, but now I guess I got a writers rush and decided to try something out. I don't know if I'll finish this, and I just got a few things worked out so far. Still, I'm curious to see how it will turn out!

Carrying it on, this story is basically a follow up for "You're beautiful". I had this idea in my mind since I finished that drama (long time ago actually--), and I guess I'm finally putting it down. It's mostly about Jeremy and an OC (faceclaim: Abigail Aldarete). I really liked Jeremy's character, and I think he could get a chance too, heh.

Anyways, let me know what you think. Feedback is always welcomed!

Foreword

Sometimes I think about the first time we met. Sometimes? Who am I kidding, it plays in my mind over and over again, especially now. We keep watching dramas, movies, but it's never like we see on the screen. You know, I can't even remember what you were wearing that day. I remembered your hair was tied up, and that was all. You were a stranger to me then, I had no reason to pay attention to such things. How would I have known then that you were you? How could I've known you would end up being mine?.. Even for just a little while...

If I knew how much you would change my life, I would've paid more attention to the details. I would've noticed how your eyes sparkled, your smile crooked slightly to the left... If I had known, I would've given you more of my time.

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seamusmommy #1
Chapter 2: Fighting Anna! Jeremy you are the nice guy, get over it.
SilkyGreen
#2
Chapter 1: Hey, I just read the first chapter of your story and I loved it! I really liked Jeremy in "You're Beautiful", and I was sad that he didn't get a happy ending. So, this was exactly what I needed... Also, your writing style is very smooth! Will you continue this fic? I sincerely hope so! Keep it up~ :)
seamusmommy #3
Chapter 1: Seems cute so far. Keep it up.