Dawn

Description

Yoongi exists at night, Jimin exists during the day, and they meet somewhere in between.

 

 

A tribute to unrealistic expectations and the club scene that Yoongi most likely had before his debut.

Also, Jimin kind of got the short end of the stick in my last fic. So this is redemption, sort of, almost?

 

Thank you for reading ^_^

 

Edit: Zunnie made a vietnamese translation here!! I can't understand it but it looks cool XD

Foreword

"Why are you here? The boy shrugs his shoulders. From the far away smoky haze of the club, he was an enticing silhouette against the backdrop sea of dancers. But here, with his chest pressed against Yoongi’s and his fingers threaded through his hair, he looks a thousand years younger."

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SeoulEH86 #1
Chapter 1: This is amazing. Sososo amazing! I think you did a good choice with this ending, it is more sad, but also more realistic and I freaking love it.
I love how you wrote Yoongi and Jimin's personnalities and the way you described both settings, morning and night, is just perfect.
turntosay #2
i just found this, wow. and this is so good tbh. thumbs up!
LetYourBeautyUnfold #3
Chapter 2: i really loved the style of writing and also the raw realism of the first ending. thanks for writing this, it was a real pleasure to read as i am just starting to get into the fandom and this ship
BB_BiBi #4
Chapter 1: Woah...i love the ending so much...it way more real than other fic ending evetho im curious whut gonna happen next
blanc205 #5
Chapter 1: this is good, really... suga needs love that jimin is. and you are right, this kind of ending is more realistic. Glad that I find this somehow, thanks for the fic ^^
crinchan #6
Chapter 1: This ending is the best. I like the kiss and everything. Also I can somehow see them meeting again, randomly on the street or in the club or something. They will stare at each other and yeah, they meet but still will leave as strangers again.
... Ignore what I wrote here but this story is so ... I love it that it makes you think. Normally I read and then my attention slips to the next thung, here I can't help but think a lot how this might continue or not and yeah, you did a great job author nim.
byujun #7
Chapter 1: omggg. i wish yoongi came back to the apartment >< good job i rly love all your writings
DeadSWORDMASTER #8
Chapter 1: I will comment here because this one already has the ending that perfectly satisfies me :D I love how you told about Yoongi's uneasiness for being exposed in the daylight and it felt so real and just right for Jimin to let Yoongi stay and leave as stranger. Your writing style sure is something and so is your work! :D
Arashika #9
Chapter 2: I agree... I prefer the first one. The alternate ending is kinder, better for the Yoonmin but definitely not as realistic.
Although a part of me can't help but hope they meet again... but from the way Yoongi reacts, he might not go back to that club again for a while just to avoid Jimin QAQ
Again I love this >_< You have a beautiful way with words.
Great job, keep writing~
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