Chapter 1: Seriously I read this chapter a second time now because I was enjoying the read so much. You have really good comedic timing and your dialogue is really on point.
Chapter 1: YES. I . LOVE. THIIIIS. JESUS ive missed your writing and this is perchance better than ever? The witty dialogue is so sharp and true to post grad dudes, with spot on comedic timing; the side characters are already great complements to the plot one chapter in; donghae's characterization is fresh and maddeningly addictive. The way you maintain hyuks thought process is golden, and i LOVE how he snapped. The reasonable nice guy that still refuses to take your is wonderful. I cant think of a single thing to improve on <333
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