I Can't Wish for Eternity 「永遠に叶わない」

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Five flowers. Five boys. 

One girl. One snowy day.

 

 

Foreword

 

Title: I Can't Wish For Eternity 「永遠に叶わない」

Author: Pocky16

Genre: Romance, Drama, Friendship

Summary:

 

Five flowers. Five boys. 

One girl. One snowy day.

 

A group of friends, which has five guys and one girl, lived in the same neighborhood for almost their whole life. Their life was almost perfect, as long as they were complete and all together. But many years have passed and each of the boys found their own courage to say their own feelings to Chiyomi. Chiyomi then moves to the United States of America and a heartbreaking news reached the five boys.

This fanfiction is written in the different characters' point of view. Timeline is not specified so events in the chapters may not be in order. (:

 

Characters: 
Mihara Chiyomi (Original Character) - A very cheerful girl. Almost every girl in their neighborhood gets jealous of her. She's liked by most of the guys in the neighborhood. She's one of the smartest people in the class. She can draw and paint. She plays the piano and sings. What's more, she's very beautiful, inside and out. 

Sakurai Sho - He's a very clumsy guy. He gets jealous easily. But despite those facts, he is a very intelligent person.

Matsumoto Jun - He's the heartthrob in the neighborhood and in the school. He has great fashion sense and known to be the 'cool' guy.

Aiba Masaki - The baby of the group (even though he's not the youngest). He's very child-like though he's very spontaneous.

Ohno Satoshi - A very quiet person. He's always found sitting on his desk while reading a book. But if only it's the six of them who are there, he becomes less quiet. He's the 'big brother' character type of person.

Ninomiya Kazunari - He's easy-going and very romantic. He writes songs with his own music and lyrics. 

 

Theme Song: Dear Snow by 嵐

 

NOTE:

Since I'm still not finished writing "Like A Movie [映画のような]", I'll finish that until I continue posting the other chapters of this fanfic. So please subscribe, haha! Anyway, I only posted this, even though I'm not finished with Like A Movie yet, because I just got the idea recently and I want you guys to tell me what you think of the plot so far, with only this foreword and the first chapter. 

Haha, before I said that I won't be posting the first chapter yet but I wanted to so yeah, I'm posting it. XD Enjoy~!

NO. I SHALL NOW POST WHENEVER I FEEL LIKE POSTING. <3 I updated for the 2nd chapter because I have lovely subscribers, people who comment and even silent readers~ Yup, I love you all. XD

 

 

Disclaimer:


The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this fictional work. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Comments

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Jennybeny #1
Chapter 6: New reader here, this story is so good and so sad at the same time. But I loved it, keep writting!!
pocky16 #2
I'm sorry guys, I wasn't able to reply to your comments for chapter 5 -__- So I'll reply to all your comments now. ^_^

aibasgirl2013 : You really like it? Oh my, I love you <3 Haha thank you so much~!

SandraHayes : Yes of course Oh-chan is sweet :")

SakuraGirl : Why, you're welcome! ^__^ I actually liked this chapter the most haha. And ooh Nino's your ichiban in Arashi? Me too!! I actually wanted to put Niji in that chapter too since it's my fave song but I didn't want to make the chapter too long compared to the others.

Now to the comments for Chapter 6 :)

SandraHayes : "They're so sweet together." Chii and... who? XD Yeah, I do too :( Hmm. I'm having second thoughts on posting it here or not.. Maybe I will. :)

SakuraGirl : Aww thank you :) But yeah, drama :( If you do go to my lj and look at it, please tell me what you think. :)

aibasgirl2013 : Well, she might have lied again haha. I'll TRY to update soon ^__^

vocbirdpic : Aww thank youu ;__; I'm sorry that it made you really emotional :(
vocbirdpic #3
O.O That's so pretty. I feel really emotional for some reason. Poor Chiyomi.
aibasgirl2013
#4
oh great... now. she's gonna get caught and in trouble and then she'll have to explain the truth. but if she says the truth then maybe when she's gone it won't hurt as much, right?
update soon~!!!
SakuraGirl
#5
Ah, their chemistries work so well together. Poor Chiyomi,she tries to be so strong despite everything.

That Nino fic sounds interesting. Maybe I will go to lj and take a look.:)
SandraHayes
#6
They're so sweet together. I feel sorry for Chii so much :(
Can't wait for the fanfic with Nino! I hope you're going to post it here soon :)
SakuraGirl
#7
Another lovely update. :) Thank you for that!
Ohno's so sweet and seems really caring when he's worrying about Chiyomi. And adorable when he's worried about things like dropping the towel or explaining how he suddenly appeared at the house. :D

And a very late comment on the previous chapter. I loved it (well, how could I not, when it's Nino?). And for some reason it made me want to go and listen Niji. :)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
SandraHayes
#8
Oh-chan is so sweet :) Can't wait for the next chapter =)
aibasgirl2013
#9
i really like this story! and its ohno's pov! i like this chapter a lot! its so sweet and cute and sweet~ ^.^ (fangirl moment thinking of how cute this is)
update soon~!!!
pocky16 #10
Kazue-chan : Oh I love that piano song! I love the songs that Yiruma composed :) Haha thank you for the comment!! Sorry I updated late but here it is!!