♬ Nfhafiza
♬ ♨Heartstrings Review and Trailer Cafe♨ ♬ {OPEN and HIRING TRAILER MAKERS} Batch Two~{Poster}~
To start with, it is really great story.
Title: the earlier title was ok - if this was a movie but this title Ludos is making more sense with the game that was happening in the story. So 5/5.
Poster: once you deleted Kris's picture from the poster it became good as the main story revolved around Kai and Violet/ OC. 15/15.
Description/forward: it is so detailed that I don't have any questions to ask but to look forward to story. This description in which you have described the three styles of love and how this title and story are revolving is making great sense. Really good job. 20/20.
Plot: it's in redouble. Due to a game how two opposite people feel for each other and how there heart was constantly been hurt due to lack of communication is beautifully described. 20/20
Structure: it is good but we are mostly reading in Violets's POV. It's good but it will be great if some POV's of Kai and some other characters are put like Kris, Sehun, Kim and Amy or even as third person's POV. So 8/10
Spelling: mostly good. 14/15.
Enjoyment: being a reader myself I am enjoying it. So I will say 14/15.
~Makino89
Sorry for the long wait, I've been behind with orders
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