♬ Nfhafiza

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To start with, it is really great story
Title: the earlier title was ok - if this was a movie but this title Ludos is making more sense with the game that was happening in the story. So 5/5.
Poster: once you deleted Kris's picture from the poster it became good as the main story revolved around Kai and Violet/ OC. 15/15.
Description/forward: it is so detailed that I don't have any questions to ask but to look forward to story. This description in which you have described the three styles of love and how this title and story are revolving is making great sense. Really good job. 20/20.
Plot: it's in redouble. Due to a game how two opposite people feel for each other and how there heart was constantly been hurt due to lack of communication is beautifully described. 20/20
Structure: it is good but we are mostly reading in Violets's POV. It's good but it will be great if some POV's of Kai and some other characters are put like Kris, Sehun, Kim and Amy or even as third person's POV. So 8/10
Spelling: mostly good. 14/15.
Enjoyment: being a reader myself I am enjoying it. So I will say 14/15.

~Makino89

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Angel-1004
#1
I requested for a review
jeon_jung_kookie
#2
How do u request for a trailer ?
Scarecrow
#3
I requested for a review
leebyongie
#4
Requested ! :)
exoticangl
#5
can i ask you to review my fic?
Ideal_Realist
#6
Chapter 7: Thank you :) im glad you didnt give full points for everything. It was good to know u enjoyed it, although I have to say I thought the plot score would be lower >.< since it was just a one shot induced by the MID era I didnt give the storyline much thought. Thanks again :)
schneizel
#7
applied; fighting ^^/
bts_kimtaehyung
#8
requested:D