Pencil

Description

“This pencil lies so still,
the world it draws will never fill,
with these dreams I put to rest,
thoughts that lay on my chest

On dark days I put it to work,
filling the paper with whatever may lurk,
in the depths of my mind,
and whatever I may find

This pencil, I view it as a key,
a treasure chest of things so free,
but I have another mishap,
and my pencil snaps”

–Corey Culler

Foreword

Been friends for years, and always by each others side, agreeing to every single thing together. That will all go to a sudden change when one of them breaks the chain in their friendship.


t i t l e Pencil
m a i n c h a r a c t e r s Park Dahee (OC), Hongbin (VIXX)
m i n o r c h a r a c t e r s n/a
m a i n s o n g Urban Zakapa - Walk Backwards
c r e d i t s

p o s t e r & b g owned

i n s p i r e d b y Urban Zakapa - Walk Backwards, another pencil poem (that i can’t find anymore), Kyuhyun - 7 Years of Love, Corey Culler - The Pencil
s t a r t e d 02112013
e n d e d 02112013
a u t h o r ‘ s n o t e sorry. I haven’t been able to write pandora 3 and echo a lot due to school. but here’s a oneshot. it just came to me during my creative writing class, and i just felt the urge to write it (like all my other stories. urgh.)
& pls. don’t say anything about this thing isn’t grammatically correct. this is all in one character’s narration, which means that my characters can speak in any way, shape or form they want. this story .

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MelT26 #1
Chapter 2: That twist was so unexpected but it works so well. Love this story.
Beauty_xoxo #2
Chapter 2: I was like º•º(confuse)...& then >~< awww(eyes became teary),BEAUTIFUL STORY....
nabi_88
#3
Chapter 2: Awwwwww...I'm about to cry already but my friend is teasing me..xddd ㅠㅠ
This is really good..
bookangel2603 #4
Chapter 2: Awwww woww just.. woww. A story full of emotion,grace and beauty. A story which touches and fills the heart with warmth yet fills our eyes with tears. I absolutely adore your masterpiece. A story which potrays the beauty of how plot-twisting then finishing with a shocking clear ending. AMAZING JOB ! ouh and the poems... SPOT ON !
exobession
#5
Chapter 2: this story is beautiful :) at first i thought it slightly confusing -- did hongbin ditch her or did he die etc
but after rereading it millions of times (YEAH) I understood and it's beautiful! Great job!!!
KanisagaNaoki12
#6
Chapter 2: Man, this story is so beautiful... I can't believe Hongbin left her. It still breaks my heart when I reread it. Still crying
emotionalwordplay
#7
Chapter 2: Gahd I'm crying. T^T
raniissi #8
Chapter 2: i thought hongbin is leaving her... hahaa my bad xD im not a vixx fan but this story touch my heart..so beautiful...
amylia_nut123
#9
Chapter 2: Its life ... Its good ;_;
amma19 #10
Chapter 2: woow ... It's great story *-*