The Man Who Stopped Time

Description

Have you ever loved someone so much you halted the spinning of your world just so that you could revolve around theirs?

 

When you were away I longed for you, I pined for you. My body, my mind, my heart, my soul. Every inch and every part of me. Every single day, I yearned for your presence to be near me. I didn't need anything else but you. I ceased functioning; I ceased living. As though you were the power source in my circuitry, the essence in my dance, the life twinkling behind my eyes. The whole reason for my existence. But you were are.

 

When you returned, I remembered why I traitorously wanted you gone in the first place.

 

I don't think I'll ever get better.

 

 

Foreword

A/N: I don't even know why I'm feeling so down today, but I am and I simply needed to get everything out of my system.

It's my first attempt at writing an EXO story and I'm plunging right into the angst. I don't even know why I chose this pairing, really. Perhaps because I see a really close parallel between them and my life? Wow, I sound really delusional.

 

You could say that I was inspired by EXO's Peter Pan and K.Will's You Don't Know Love, except that there probably wouldn't be a happy ending to this story. Very much like mine.

 

 

Credits to Impervious from The ω ι ѕ н f υ ℓ тнσυgнтѕ Shoppe for the poster!

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naomi_sab
#1
FML. To read or not to read, that is the question. Why you break my OTP heart. Do you not love me enough. :(((((
flufflypopcorndog #2
I hate myself right now. I wish I didn't read the comments in the first place!! Now I know that they won't end up together!! TT^TT
cornhob
#3
Chapter 3: Oh my god. I won't lie i cried. Really. I feel so sorry for Kai in this story. Too much feels to handle. And now..Im going to cry my eyes out again. Thanks for this story btw.
blind_angel #4
Chapter 3: ... I really wished they got together it's sad to watch jongin hurt like this
Nice story though :) I really liked it
blind_angel #5
Chapter 1: I cried TTnTT it's so sad and perfect I love how jongin loves Kyungsoo ><
dbskoana #6
Chapter 3: this was gorgeous.....brought tears into my eyes...even though I wanted so bad a happy ending, I knew that it will be a sad one....congrats, you really have talent, so keep on writing!
NotAppropriate
#7
Chapter 2: That caught me off guard. I was thinking (more like, hoping) that Kyungsoo would drop hints that he's conflicted because of his hidden feelings for his best friend. Poor Jongin. But he's at fault too for holding back in confessing to Kyungsoo how he truly feels. Though there's no guarantee that it won't be a one-sided love. Sigh. Nonetheless, my commendation to you for another well-written chapter!
forever_trying
#8
Chapter 1: asdfghjkl; i really like this ; u ;
very well written and just enough angst and feelings and ugh
the next chapter can't come soon enough~