The Right Time

Description

Wherein a shared passion for soccer (among other things) brings together a girl coming out of her shell and a boy itching to escape the limelight.

 

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“Do you want to play? You’re wearing the shoes for it.” A soft voice cut through his thoughts. Ah, that’s why, Luhan reminded himself.

“Do you mind if I do?” Time to press himself into the situation. “I mean with you, I do play…a bit…back at home.” He rakes his fingers through his hair. Ugh, he sounded like a schoolboy, not a top idol with countless girls screaming his name. This is going to be difficult if he couldn’t get his act together.

“Sure, that’s okay!” She props one foot on the bench to adjust her sock closer to her knee. Luhan can’t help staring at her legs – and how shapely they were – then reminding himself how painful her kick would be if she caught him staring.

“Are you sure you want to? The air is a bit chilly and your cold might get worse,” she said, eyeing Luhan’s mask.

Luhan’s eyes rounded, looking closer to a deer caught in headlights than usual, remembering the mask that in a way afforded him a lot of freedom. He hesitates a bit, then takes off his mask, bracing himself for the inevitable.

Foreword

First fic ever! I heartily blame my three fellow EXO fangirl friends for peer-pressuring me to make one since they all manage to post chapters of their own fics (coincidentally?) during my vacation in Korea. So I mustered the courage to take out my laptop and started writing this during the plane ride going back to home.

I initially planned to make this a second person POV but I can't resist placing Luhan's side of the story, so I'm sorry for the schizo storytelling. My curiosity is constantly piqued everytime the EXO boys say that Luhan is very manly, and I figured that they likely get to see this side of him when he plays soccer. So voila!  Plot point! (not to mention that Luhan is high in my bias list so....)

Based on my rough outline (which is floating in my head, no commitments hehe) this would take a few (hopefully not too long) chapters to finish. Hopefully I get to the finish line asap 'cause you know, there are lots of awesome EXO goodness in cyberspace and not enough time to digest all of them.

 

Recommended tracks: Matchbox Twenty's Overjoyed (Luhan POV) and of the course the song in Chapter 2 :D

                                           

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9/28/2014 wow, sudden surge of subscribers! thanks for reading and subscribing!

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affinityy #1
Chapter 7: This was so sweet, god bless
beautifyme
#2
Chapter 7: awww sweet. i really enjoyed it. thank you so much!
_spencer
#3
Chapter 7: probably the shortest and sweetest luhan fan fic I've enjoyed~

this was so good, gonna reread it some day :D
jooyeon15
#4
Chapter 7: update more chapter :)
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#5
Chapter 7: My feels are overflowing
AnimaM #6
Chapter 7: You write beautifully and fluently! A perfect ending to a perfect story! Brilliant
lovelysnowfl4ke
#7
Chapter 6: DAMN SON THIS CHAPTER HAS GOT TO BE MY FAVE WOW :(( I just wanted to scream out loud bec :(((( perfect! Just... Perfect!!
xiubootybuns
#8
Chapter 6: Amazing! I love this story I almost squealed out loud (I'm in class) when I saw it was updated.
xiubootybuns
#9
Chapter 5: It's beautiful I love manly luhan the most! I'm so excited for the next chapter.