I've read lot of stories with this kind of plot...
so, from the beginning until the end i can expect what will happen.. but i doesn't meant that you didn't do a good job..
but in this stories it seems sehun was "extra-pissed me off". eventhough, he had some bad memories about being bullied, it doesn't meant that he can do whatever he wants to do especially to a girl...
about your composition style..
i think you should re-arrange the story...
divide it some sub-paragraph.. so that, the readers can read properly...
and i think grammars and typos are unnoticeable..
so, it means that you did a good job..
btw... keep writing stories and hope you can show your improvement for the next one.. :D
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