Clockwork Disturbed [HIATUS]

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If you could turn back time, would you do it, even if you run the risk of making things worse? Park Choongjae took the chance, and found out the hard way that he really shouldn't have tampered with the past.

Foreword

~Clockwork Disturbed~

Clockwork Rewind.

A government service which all citizens of the country can avail of, free of charge. It involves allowing the person to go back to a certain time in their lives, and granting them the chance to change the way their present and future unravel.

However, there is one catch: This service can only be used once per person in their whole lifetime, so if they end up messing up their past and therefore, their present and future, then they cannot go back and alter it as it would go against the very laws of nature and paradoxes itself.

One chance to make things right, or go horribly wrong. Are you brave enough to take the chance?

 

 

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A/N: Decided to do something a little different with my forewords from now on, instead of just taking an excerpt from the story and copy-pasting it on lol. Edit: Done writing chapter 1, will be part of Bulk Update :D I've never been this focused on writing in such a long time.

Edit 2: I've now figured out what path I'm going down on. This is going to be my first full-length fic where I focus deeper on three-way love, hence, this is going to be RicJinDy. :D

Edit 3: The wonderful poster is done by the ever-talented MusicChibi @ King for a Day Graphic Shop. Thank you so much! <3333

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gwendal738
Chapter 3 is in the works~ :D
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Tezukai #1
Chapter 3: Oh, I was really thinking he had done something so Eric had his life or something now, or at least Andy :P
But I love the explanation, cause I was really wondering how a light switch could do much, but that explanation was really good, and so poetic, how the light switch symbolized his relations to that specific person :D
I was almost with Jin on the whole light switch symbolizing life thing,band wondering if he killed him, but that would ruin the story :P
I mean, it would pretty much just end there :P
And now, having to make him fall in love again, that can be a big problem, even if he loved you before, cause so many factors play a part in getting in a relationship, so even if you were perfect for each other before, things might play out totally different now, I really feel bad for Jin, having to know how things could have been :(
andy_dyan #2
Chapter 3: Yeah! At least Andy is alive!^^
orangekath #3
Chapter 3: Make him fall for you again jin. 빨리!
monicaandy #4
Chapter 2: interesting . i like the idea of this fic . maybe he's with eric in this " new" life ? so he has to make him fall in love with him again ? but i'm sure that andy is alive. can't wait for the next chapter :) beautiful background <3
Tezukai #5
Chapter 2: No no no, why!!?
Andy can't be gone, he just moved out right?
Please tell me he's fine and this can be fixed
Aish, why did a light switch do so much damage, I really felt the anxiety as he got up and they told him they weren't responsible
But what if it has nothing to do with the light switch?
What if Jin was wrong about how his future would look if he just changed that?
What if that presentation changed something else, and they broke up?
Or Andy just died later?
zatylitzshcj #6
Chapter 2: Well..i got a feeling sunho is alive yet he dont remember being with junjin like how junjin remembered coz he hvent met him?LoL as if i'm the author, kekeke. Anyhow, nice fic..love it! Cant wait for the nxt chpter :) more importantly love the header. hehe ^^
andy_dyan #7
Chapter 2: :'( Is Andy still dead? Yah Junjin! Aish! So frustrating y did u have to turn off that switch! :(
Tezukai #8
Chapter 1: I love this idea, it's so well thought through, and I love how you gave us the paper to read, it was very real, and you found yourself thinking about how you should do this, and if it was a good idea :D
I really loved the fact that it was all described like it was just a normal thing, like going to the bank, you never really stopped to think that this was fantasy.
Also, Andy died before the story even began this time :P
Poor guy gets killed off a lot :D
andy_dyan #9
Chapter 1: 1st chap! and Andy is DEAD! yah Junjin! dont mess up on bringing back Andy... ugh! but he will mess up for sure *i guess... those rules are freakn scary!
orangekath #10
jindy love!! subscribed! :))))
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