Immature

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His prematureness gave me my greatest treasure, but that didn't mean I wasn't hurt by it. He played me time after time yet I still loved him. Should I forgive him or should I just move on?

Foreword

I wrote this long ago and I barely found it after I transfered everything to my new laptop. So it might be sort of stupid, but enjoy.   

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xiaolin98 #1
Chapter 1: Can I curse Sehun?? Because he is a ing tard
1312AZ #2
Chapter 1: It's a great story,,,,, and let me tell you I just feel like I want to cut sehun's balls like seriously.... Just get the off man
rracchel #3
Chapter 1: Sehun in this fic is sooooo irresponsible gosh
GDPKSO #4
Chapter 1: The only thing that gets me really pissed off here is how Sehun had the audacity to blame Luhan. Like Luhan didn’t try calling or anything.
But aside from that I really like this, thank you for writing it ❤️
izy_angelic #5
Chapter 1: It kind of hurt actually? I just can't accept that kind of attitude by Sehun. Gosh... Never felt this much hatred towards Sehun. Grrr
MakiSD #6
Chapter 1: Luhan had a traumatic past and as he longed to be loved decided to give the opportunity to Sehun but it caused more damage than expected, and although Luhan tried to forget could not stop loving it, even so I do not that think Sehun deserved his forgiveness.

This is the kind of story in which I would not have cared if Luhan ended up with someone more who would value and respect him.
I like the story but at the same time it saddens me and leaves me with a bittersweet feeling.
foyezza91 #7
Chapter 1: I love luhan but I think in this situation sehun doesn't even deserve luhan.If I'm baekhyun I would hate sehun for sure....he keep blaming luhan and doesn't even admit his fault.Usually I would love if the family is together but this storyline make it the opposite XDXDXD WHY AM I LIKE THIS??? XDXDXD you just made sehun character so unlikeable I can't bring myself to support him! XDXDXD
eonnieyah #8
Chapter 1: sehun you're a
gustin82 296 streak #9
Chapter 1: Uhhh I am so relieved they're together finally..
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