Coffee on my Keyboard

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Lonely E. Den, in Vancouver, meets a lonely girl. Little do they know, they're closer than they think.

Foreword

9 September 2013



Today is four months that Soo Ji has passed of Leukemia. More than half of my memories with her, are in this coffee shop. I remember, one time, she spilled her mocha on the ground, making a girl and her brother fall. After he was sitting at his table, she couldn't stop talking about how cute he was. I thought he was okay, but not my type. Now that I think about it, he looks a lot like somebody, but I can't place my finger on it. Anyways, I feel very empty without her here to laugh with me. We always used to talk about kpop, and fangirl. We used to get very odd looks from the people around us. The last group that she introduced to me was LC9. I think that is why I love them so much. It makes me happy and sad when I listen to their music. I just miss Soo Ji so much. I would do anything to just be sitting in this coffee shop how we used to, laughing with each other over some coffee. But she's gone now, and I have yet to make any more friends. That is why I come and sit in the same spot in this old, run down, coffee shop. I think I should go before I look like an idiot balling my eyes out..

Love,

KawaiiRamyun~


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9 September 2013



Okay, so this is my first post, I guess. I don't really know what to talk about on something like this, so I will just talk about myself. My name is Jaedyn, 24 years of age. I was born in Korea, but came to Canada later in life. I am studying Sociology; I am at a coffee shop that I used to go to with my little sister, that just recently committed suicide. I come to watch human behavior, and, right now, there is a girl on the opposite side of the shop, appearing to be very upset. She's typing frantically on her keyboard; I'm afraid she's going to spill her coffee on it. She comes in every day, as I do, alone. But enough about that poor soul. Today, I cooked dinner for my mother then left to talk to my friend over seas. I just happened to come across KAT.com, it is full of some interesting people, and can help with my further research. I am, as well, a huge kpop fan. I got to say, my favorite groups are: LC9 and Brown Eyed Girls. I don't know what to talk about. I think I may have mentioned that a few times. So I think I will leave. It;'s starting to get dark, and I have to walk quite a while from this coffee shop.

Uh, bye.

SuperBullet 

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Pikkapikkaneko16
#1
Chapter 1: CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP BTW!! KEEP IT UP (:
Pikkapikkaneko16
#2
Chapter 1: Heeeyy omg im the first to comment :3 im lovin the story!!! I can see a lot of connection between the characters. So im not an lc9.... Yet lol this story makes me want to look them up now.... but anyway I will give some advice: try to be a little more specific with things. For example when jessa tripped try to make it less "I was walking, my foot got caught, I tripped and fell on my knee. Etc." Make it less choppy. Also make the sentences different like start the sentences with different words (avoid using I a lot but use it enough to get the point that its "I" who is doing these things. Not tryin to bash yah or anything lol just tryin to help not that I'm a pro or anything cause I'm kind of a beginner too. >.> but what helps me get better at writing is reading really well written fanfics I swear it helps. But anyway I love this story! (: its so cute <