Chapter 1: you know what makes it really sad?---that I can actually imagine this happening. their acts, and how you picture them, just fit the characters. also you wrote it well. oh and your title! I can't just walk by it. it grabbed my attention... though seemed a bit irrelevant---until the last paragraph. pretty much seems like you know what you do as a writer, so I look forward to reading more from you!
Chapter 1: I cried... It's one of my favourite couples in VIXX, and you just described them so well. It's the typical Scorpio/Aquarius relationship in which one of them is too attached, and the other wants nothing but to feel. Beautifully written, although it broke my heart a bit haha
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