The Breaking

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Description

Jungkook has lived a typical, happy life: he has great friends, a wonderful family, and is about to have the best sixteenth birthday ever... until he fails the testing and finds that he has what the government calls the Breaking, and now he belongs to them.


 
This story is about a country where there is no such thing as freedom, where even the colors one is allowed to wear is tightly governed. Add in the fact that when one turns sixteen, they must submit to government testing. What are they looking for? It's simple, really.
 
They want to know if you have the Breaking. They are afraid of those born with the genetic ability to do supernatural things, the ability to break their system and their rule. They want to control those with abilities and force them into servitude for their country.
 
Once one is found with the Breaking, their life as they knew it is over. Their family strikes their names from the records, they lose all human rights, and they are released into the state's care. They go through tests and torture, all to see what they can do. And once they are fully studied, they are either used for the betterment of the City or they are left in their cells to die, too weak and broken to carry on. 
 
But now, those known as the Broken will begin to challenge the system, to use their abilities to crack the system. One day they may even cause the Breaking everyone fear, but for today, they've had enough.
 
It is time for the Broken to rise.

Foreword

Trailer by my awesome dongsaeng IamEunice
 
Beautiful poster and background by NOLZA21 GRAPHICS 

Do not read comments unless you want story spoilers!!! =)

 

 
 

TRANSLATIONS:
Vietnamese - by LeeJi98
 
Arabic - by SHINee_World01
 https://k13u.wordpress.com/category/xرواية-المُحطمِين/
 
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I have written a Valentine's story, to be revealed on Feb 14, for all of you. See link in latest chapter

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iamleduong
#1
i really really like your work. can i translate it into Vietnamese? of course, i will write enough sources.
Snowflakecookies #2
Chapter 32: Normally not one for kinda-gory-violent stories but this really kept me on the edge :) i enjoyed reading it!!
scarletjustine
#3
This is one of my most favorite stories. great job. I loved it :-)
Baekmylight12 #4
legendary
monochrom #5
I reread this, again. If I could upvote this story more than once, I would. This story is amazing!
Diyaenra_18 #6
Chapter 32: I SWEAR THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING I LOVE YOUUU
alejojaz000
#7
Chapter 34: Very good story
DragonKookie #8
Chapter 25: oh my god.. I cannot believe I forgot about Yoongi.. all this time I was thinking "who could it be..? We already met Jimin and Namjoon..." man I feel like an idiot xD
Kawaiikpopgirl #9
Chapter 1: AHH! this whole fanfiction was so good <3 this is like my third time reading it! Thank you for creating this story!
stop_paper_slaughter #10
https://www.wattpad.com/story/81088215-the-unknown?nofs=1 This person seems to have copied this work