Chapter 1: I think this story is amazing. It's written in a way that's kinda matter-of-fact and off-hand. That really emphasizes the way he's not quite fully connected to the group, but a part of them at the same time. The way the characters act is like that too. The writing style also fits the setting. The way it's right there and seems a great place, close to the sea and the way the people are a group, but at the same time manages to make it seem undesirable and make the people seem stuck not only in the town, but in their own lives as well.
The style of writing really fits the story well, the way there are details and lack of details dotted all around the place. It gives it a bit of a strange flair, which makes the story's atmosphere beautiful.
I knew rocking before I read the fic, but I went and saw the Teaser only after reading this (yesterday) and it's like a little trailer to the story.
Even tho this would make a cool ending in the open end kind of way, I'm still hoping that you'll continue writing this. What's there so far, would make a really good ending tho.

Sorry, if this is unnecessarily long or confusing but I kinda needed to say that^^

I liked it. I hope there's more :)

Chapter 1: I like the way this was written.