Secret Code by _TinkerBell_
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Genre: Romance/Angst
Main Character(s): Kyungsoo/Jongin (KaiSoo)
Contains:
Chapter(s): Two (Completed)
Summary: Kai and D.O secretly liked each other but they didn't get to confess their feelings. Not until after eight years.
Title ★★★★★
"Secret Code" hmm....yeah! I guess it is kinda catchy. I might be attracted to it and the more once I realized it's a Kaisoo fic! Cause I love that squishy thing and my baby Kai :D so yeah definitely! However, I searched aff and there at least about 10+ fics using the same title :s so that's a negative side for originality.
Plot ★★★★★
I still hadn't gotten to hear "Goodbye Summer" until I read your story! The song is definitely a plus! And God knows how MUCH I love songfics! I think they are the best fics cause with good song you can come up with a great solid plot and your story was no exception! ;) It was a lovery story and I love how you mixed the song along with the plotline and use it to your advantage. Good job!
Grammar ★★★★★
Before you, I had to take on a hard case of grammar and then going to you I must say I was a bit frustrated since I wanted more than anything for the next story I'd review to be grammar-free. Sadly, that wasn't the case. I was surprised that you lived in Canada but english isn't you first language so I guess it's either french or chinese...I dunno. But at least I can say that it isn't as bad as I've seen. I could still understand and read through out the story. However, I will point out some things so that you might be able to change them. Ready? Here goes:
Originality ★★★★★
I really haven't read a Kaisoo like this but I have read my stories about the secret love about to get married and being too late to confess and stuff. Still, I'm gonna gve you BIG kudos for the ending! It really got me by surprise! Though at one point I already knew what was going on. Like, I even thought that the wedding was actually a set up for them to get married and Kris, Krystal and Amber were like helping them finally get together! XD but still, your ending was lovely! :) Well done!
Reader's POV
;A; Lovely! I really loved this! My Kaisoo feels were all over the place! The song didn't make it any better! Amber did such as great job as a composer! :D The song really fitted so well with the story and the ending was just too adorable and funny with Krystal and Kris x'D you had me there! Cause I was already crying (seriously! you made me cry! Ignore me, I'm a softie ><) when Kyungsoo and Kai were in the school and I thought "This is it. Goodbye! Farewell to Kaisoo!" And I was so upset cause I really don't ship Kaistal so when I continue reading and saw what she did, I think that was the first time I felt pity for her! X'D lol! Anyways! I really enjoyed your story! It was fun reviewing it! ^^
I give your story:
★★★★★
Get a beta reader ASAP or PM me!
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