Never forgotten (currently rewriting )

Description

A childish love that grew stronger by the years and a promise they shared, a promise they will never break—to never forget about each other.

Donghae, being a high school student, has never forgotten that promise they shared together. He still thinks that someday he will meet Hyukjae, but waiting 8 years is very tiring and he misses his best friend. Even though it has been years, he is still determined that Hyukjae will return.

 

Donghae goes to school with his best friends. He has an amazing mother and his past father left him with beautiful memories to remember. His life is completely normal, nothing strange.

 

Hyukjae on the other side was living a hell of a life, forcing himself to separate from Donghae, his best friend and most important, the love of his life. But even though it hurts, he knows it’s the right thing to do. His life is messed up with him being the head of a powerful gang with many enemies, everyone is waiting for him to show any sign of weakness to attack him.  And there is no way he will let anyone hurt his precious angel.

 

An angel doesn’t belong in hell.

 

 

Foreword

Hi!!!

 

Omg! My first fanfic!

 

There will be some mistakes and that’s because English is not my first language.

 

And I’m sorry to tell you that I won’t update regularly because I am in my second year of the IB program, so there will be a lot of homework to do. I hope you understand!

 

That’s it, I would really like it if you comment on what you think about the story and mabey give some advises in order to improve my writing skills. And also subscribe!

 

//sora

Must read!!

Hi

So because the gramma in this story is very bad (mainly because I wrote this a few years back) I’m taking my time rewriting everything and posting it again without deleting everything. So you would notice now that the first chapters are better than the rest, but that will be solved when I rewrite very chapter.  Currently the first 2 chapters are done and I’m working on the third one.

//sora

 

 

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denisevelazquez
#1
Chapter 10: I must say ur grammar got better but dont take it the wrong way my words could sometimes be misleading which in fact what i said earlier was meant to be good. By the way ill try to leave comments as soon as u update. That way u could see im still reading ur chapters
zaidain
#2
Chapter 10: Love this! Please continue
Diamonte_s
#3
Chapter 10: Great story author nim ^^ though its a little difficult to read with grammar and typos mistake, but I still managed it:)
Last chap was so fluffy.. Stupid kyuhyun disrupt the moment :/
Hope you'll update next chapter soon^•^
xulikilla_elf #4
Chapter 10: Hi, new reader here!! ;)
I just found this fic, and I really like the story!! ^_^
Hyuk is so head over heels for Hae!! And I'm sure Hae feels the same towards Hyuk ;)
They almost kissed!! I would have liked to see that! :)
I'll be waiting for the next update!
Fighting! ^_^
WonderellaSVT
#5
Chapter 10: Thanks for the update author-nim! I missed this fic. Really :))))
Please update again soon ~~
FIGHTING!
Jennifer212
#6
hi,are you finding some reviewers to review / make a graphic foryour story??
request now!!
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secondsunrise
#7
Chapter 9: Eunhae are finally back together! ~ ^0^ yayyyy!!!
wonderfullbuble #8
Chapter 9: Finally donghae... You're wake up...
Thanks for the update :)
EastSea_hae #9
Chapter 9: Thanks for update :^)
EunhyuradeLuffy #10
Chapter 9: Possessive Hyuk as always the best (>̯͡⌣<̯͡)
Please don't mke it complicated story :D

Thanks for update (*^▽^*)