Fractured Residuum

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Because it's frustrating that up until the end, he just let's you have your way.

Even if you don't want him to let you.

 

 

Foreword

A Break-up Fic.

 

 

(08/11)

UPDATE: This was intended to be a one shot.

It will be a 3 part "One Shot" now.

All 3 stories can stand alone but it can be connected to one another too.:) 

 

AigooNoona
Part 2 should be up soon.:)

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Mellany
#1
Chapter 2: OH DEAR GOD! I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU REALLY WROTE A SEQUEL!!
Do you know how much I love you right now?? <3

Seeing how much Yongguk was suffering made me sad. He was a mess. If it wasn’t his twin, I don’t what would’ve been of him… But it just show how much he loved her. It’s too bad for him to realize just now the intensity of his feelings towards Dani.

I have to admit, when he went to meet her, I hoped that everything would be alright. I mean, he ordered her favorite drink and then they smiled (I spazzed like a crazy when Yongguk gave his shy smiles, I was totally imagining it! So ing cute ^O^).

But then… his lacks of words screwed everything up. She kept talking about how it was all her fault (even the both knowing it wasn’t) and she even apologized, it was the worst. Each words she said were probably like poison to Yongguk. Like always, he couldn’t bring himself to deny anything and Dani took his silence for an "yeah, you're right".
I was so pissed when she left and he didn’t hold her back! But it’s his personality, right? He can’t just change like that…

Okay, now I’m totally imagining a scene: Dani will go back to that coffee another day, the barista will give her Yongguk’s paper that she found on the floor and kept it. And then, it would be like a super romantic movie. Dani will be like “he loves me, he really loves me!” and she will run to him crying of happiness. I’m crazy, it’s a fact xD

I loved that chapter, it made me understand a little of Yongguk’s personality and even if he look like a looser, I can’t stop from supporting him because I know that his feelings are as pure as an angel =)

Did I already said that I love you for writing a sequel, I mean TWO sequels! THANK YOU!!!
Looking forward for the next chapter =D
mayeskie #2
Chapter 2: Omo! This is so sad. Can't Yongguk just tell her? My Ghaad! Have some balls to do it, man! Poor Dani :(
pakyubang
#3
Sings youngjae's part, roller coaster ride~~~~ btw shoutout to yongnam hyung for being the best hyung! And yongguuuuuk i want to hug you and whack your head at the same time!!!! Whyyyy ;~~~;
yonggukx
#4
Why is he so.... Argh!! This is so frustrating .
pakyubang
#5
I CANNOT WAIT BELOVED AUTHORNIM YOU ARE SO AWESOME HUHUHU
yonggukx
#6
Sequel please
An_Yeong_Jae
#7
Chapter 1: Atdhfhdjiend so sad! T.T
Can you make a sequel, pleaseeeee? ;;;
pakyubang
#8
To the end, he's frustrating. Fukk
Mellany
#9
Chapter 1: That was… unexpectedly wonderful.
You write so well, it’s so impressive that I've read it a second time while listening to “What my heart tell me to do” =)
I have to admit that I’ve been disappointed with Yongguk when he just said “… Ok then.” But like she said, he always had let her have her way. He probably knew all along that she was hurt and that breaking up was inevitable.
And in the end he even say he loves her, I've would said that it was a beautiful confession if the “and I’m sorry” wasn’t there…
I can’t stop thinking what would have happened if he had fought instead of giving up right away :c

Thank you for sharing that incredible one shot! I loved it A LOT <3