You Can't Control Me

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Kim Na Ri's life was going the way she planned.

But when everything is going good, something bad has to happen.....more like always. The trouble in her life was Kim Chin Ho, her own younger brother. 

She wanted to laugh everytime she had to say his name, it meant precious and goodness.

She snorts, What Bull. 

He dropped out of school and now getting himself involved with gangs, leaving her debts and the responsibility of bailing him out from jail. 

Eventually, Na Ri would realize that she would be happy to continue to do all that. She would have chosen that life over the one she would be force to receive later on. 

 

Foreword

I didn't want to add this but it is starting to become worrying for me again - 

My story is not the same as Loviet's 'Home'. It can't be the same if you look at the years the stories were published. Also, there is a message that Loviet kindly placed in her 'Home's' foreword. Many readers have mentioned it in the comment section and I'm not offended, I'm glad you brought it up but it's getting repetitive for me to explain myself. This story may not be as great as Loviet's 'Home' but it was still one of my earlier works which I'm fond of. I don't want to feel like I'm plagiarizing a popular story. Thank you. 

Sriracha31
[Control] 2.12.17 - I have no idea why this story (which is extremely lacking) is getting subscribers so I thank you all <3

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Niho16 13 streak #1
Chapter 35: Second time reading this and it’s still as good as I remember. Can never get tired of reading this story. Great job. BAP <3
PrincessSisi #2
Chapter 36: So while this does have some similarities to "Home" as you note at the start, it is really just because you used the "stereotypes" associated with BAP. Their MVs set them up as aliens or a gang and so that motif shows up in many stories. That said, this piece was really well written and interesting throughout. I loved the character development that happened and how you advanced the romance aspects. It well well paced for this type of story where some other authors may push too much action and not think of how to really move forward the interpersonal relationships in a logical way. I know this story is older, but it was definitely worth the read and is one of my new favorite on AFF. Now I am off to read some of your other stories!
theidisnotvalid #3
Chapter 35: whenever i read the scene that she runs her hand to calming bang from the nightmare or to make bang had a proper sleep sent a warm vibes to my heart immediately and unknowingly formed a smile on my face somehow i imagined it as me doing that to bang instead lol, i love that so much❤ u really do a wonderful job authornim❤
AnieNana
#4
Chapter 36: That story is so wonderful! Love it so so so so much! Going to read the sequel ^.^
swaglien
#5
Chapter 1: This is sad. I can feel that i'll regret reading this cuz in the end i'll be a sobbing mess
kimsana98 #6
Chapter 36: I have no idea how many times I've read this. It's so hard to find well written fic like this.
Wikewiki #7
Chapter 36: This story is really really really really amazing. Honestly I came after read 'Home'. No wonder 'Home' author got inspired by your story a lot.
I like this story not too heavy nor too light to read.
escrewmo #8
Chapter 36: Omg im so happy that i read this!!! The storylines are quite unique and you really got me there with chinho's death!! I just love your writing styles bcs you always mess with my emotions everytime i read your storiess^^ keep writing good stuffs authornimㅋㅋㅋ
vanillamochis
#9
Chapter 36: This really really good and I've read it like 4 times already
-hwarin-
#10
Chapter 36: tbvh this is my third time reading this bcs bbang is bae as heck <3 anyway, WTF I CANT BELIEVE MYSELF THAT I FINISHED READING THIS FIC IN ONE DAY HOLYSHHHH mwA i love u bYE