A friend with Junhong

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You've been neighbors and long time friend with Junhong.  Your brother just found out the girl that he loved more then the world had been cheating on him for the past month.  You run off to a park, that you've gone to as a kid with your mom, to think.  Junhong was asked to look for you and he knows about your thinking spot.  He's your friend as well as a good shoulder to cry on when your sad.

 

Authors note: I did this as a stress reliever.  I did start another one, but I didn't like how that one was turning out, and my friend said I was going back to my old ways of writing again.  So I did this one as a younger view.  This may or may not have more parts to it, but if readers want more I will be glad to build off of what I have.  Feed back is welcomed, I always do want to improve my writing.

Foreword

            I swung myself slowly on the swing, letting my feet drag on the ground.  There was a little trench that had started and it kept growing with every passing minute.  My brother’s life was changing; the girl that he loved dumped him for another man.  And I was left to pick up the pieces to help him through this hard time. 

            I was glad that it was summer, most of my thinking could be done outside and late into the night, I looked up at the night sky, only seeing the lights from the city that covered the stars above.  I watched as two hands grabbed hold of the chain of the swing to stop me, and seen Junhong’s face come into view.  “What do you want?” I asked sourly.  I didn’t like people coming to me when I’m in deep thought.

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