Dissipate

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***this story is now on an indefinite hiatus***

 

Luhan is on his way to follow in the footsteps of his parents by becoming a Modifier: someone who modifies genetic code to make it perfect. His skills are promising, but then a mysterious girl named Hyerin appears in Central and suddenly he doesn't know what to do anymore. He falls madly for her, but there are consequences to a secretly forbidden love, and no one is an exception in the mechanical eyes of the Generator. 

Foreword

PREVIEW

“She was like smoke: so beautiful that it was painful when I breathed her in, and she slipped through my fingers and dissipated into the air.”

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The last time I saw her, had been about a year ago. The building had been burning, the heat rolling off my skin in uncomfortable and chafing movements like it was a second layer of clothing. I remember my eyes couldn’t stop blinking from the smoke and no matter how much we trained for these kind of situations, it would never make the burn of breathing in black fumes hurt any less.

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I don’t know how it had been so easy for Hyerin to enter my life. Looking back on it now, she was brought in by a breeze from a distant storm, calm but whispering of trouble.

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“The rain washes everything away,” she said after a while“Please don’t wash away, Luhan.”

 


UPDATED AUTHOR'S NOTE

Here with my second fic: Dissipate.

It's written in Luhan's POV, and I don't know, this started as something to get rid of my writer's block for A Taste of Temptation, but then it developed into something a lot bigger. 

I have recently finished ATT, so I plan to update more frequently, as I'm sure I've made people wait long enough. I just hope that you all can wait a little longer for steady updates, at least until I have finished all college applications. Thank you for your interest in this story!


I came up with this idea at 3am when I couldn't sleep, so if there are any minor similarities to anything other than my own, they are complete coincidences. Please do not plagiarize, copy, take this as your own; ask me first if you want to translate this with credits, and I'll think about it.

Thank you!

elysian_visions
7/23/15: I have decided to continue this σ(≧ε≦o) (plus a new poster/background!)

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againagainagain #1
Chapter 4: We support you. In life we all change, priorities shift. This being David I do think you're a gifted writer and keep it up in some shape or form. All the best! Who knows, maybe the hiatus may end one. For now take care
SonJieun
#2
You're not giving up on this story, are you?
uroppa #3
Now i remember y i liked these kind of fantasy dystopia genres :))))
daragonnim #4
Chapter 3: Please continue this!
i-am-serene
#5
Chapter 2: This is so beautifully written. Your writing style amazes me so much. I gave this fic a chance to read because I was done reading A taste of temptation and it wasnt complete and I was all like "nooooooo!" Ahaha. The story flows so smoothly. I wish I can write like you. XD my sentences are usually really long and they dont flow haha. Oh well. (;
VCo0kie97
#6
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onlyonejjy #7
Chapter 2: Interesting plot it's so unique! Update soon :)
shinyiuhan
#8
Chapter 1: Wow. I felt like I read an excerpt from a best-selling novels. Your ideas are beyond fan fiction levels and I really admire you for that author-nim ^^ i hope you update both your stories soon :)
lastrainhome
#9
Chapter 1: Woah. This seems pretty interesting, plus, the plot is rather unique!