Unnatural

BTS: Escape to Redemption

Taemin had no idea what he'd just seen.

But he did know that he was this close to dying somehow and there was a dead body close to him. 

His hearing is clouded with his heart beat rapidly dashing throughout him and heighting what could only be an anxiety attack. Minho managed to do that often.

He blinked his tears away--even though it wasn't manly, he was terrified--watching as the thing he knew as Minho was being mercilessly dragged away, water escaping his own eyes as he tried reaching out for him.

Taemin recoiled from the hands unable to get it stick in his mind that Minho wasn't normal. No one has wings or black crawling over them. No one has white eyes. No one sounds completely animalistic.

But Minho did.

And that wasn't natural.

What could he think of Minho now? Would Minho have killed him? Was Minho a liar?

That's wasn't Minho; no it wasn't. Something ate Minho and took his body--that was not Minho!

Taemin cried out once more, shielding his face from the scene as it became too real. Was he really about to die? That Joon guy got in his head somehow, something unnatural, and it was . . . painful.

He was going to die bt the two things that brawled out no matter who won, wasn't he?

These were . . . Monsters.

The heartbroken look on 'Minho's face caused his own to screw up further. He was so confused and it frightended him further. He didn't know whether to feel sorry, angry, or sympathetic.

Everything was moving too fast for him and his natural self couldn't keep up.

'Minho' was being dragged away, flinching sometimes as smoke emitted from his body from the restraints. Tears fell as he begged Taemin to stop thinking. To listen to him. To believe everything was alright. Nothing was different.

But Taemin truly didn't know. He didn't know anything now. Science had gone to waste, his knowledge was invalid, he was just too slow to comprehend.

But his hand reached out for 'Minho', unconsciously trying to get up.

What was coming over him, he didn't know. Maybe 'Minho' was controlling him, toying with him, just to be freed from whoever was pulling him away.

He didn't know if he really wanted to get up or cower away. It wasn't a manly thing to do, cower, but his brain just couldn't put itself on the automatic self-defense mode. He was stuck in a five year old's panicked thought process.

But he was still reaching, tears heavy as he found himself wanting to grab the thing's hand. He was pushed back on his shoulder, a man holding on to his outstretched hand and forcing him back to whatever reality he was in.

  "I'll make it better, son."

 

 

----Note~---- HI.

No color coded note today. I'm on my phone.

My computer won't connect to the internet. >.>

I just spent this WHOLE HOUR writing this out on my phone and it's less than two pages. I'M A BAD TEXTER OKAY.

So excuse any mistakes because dang, I'm sooo not going back for that. xD

This is a little sight on Taemin st the scene of the crime. Very vague I know, but it shall go in depth I promise.

Sorry for not uploading the next chapter on Saturday. Gotta write more again. I've been out all week.

So yeah.

I'm tired and my fingers are going to break if I text any more. xD

Thank you to any views comments or subs. ♥♥♥

~very-crappy-texter-FlaMinhoe

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iluvcutestuffandidky
#1
Chapter 40: GODDAMMIT
WHY
you just to burst my bubble
I WAS SOOOOO LOOKING FORWARD TO A SEQUEL
AND THEN YOU SAY THERE IS NO SEQUEL
/cries/
but its okay because series take a hell lot out of you and just
its okay
i still hope you write some oneshots tho
please write one shots
Yunie1827 #2
Chapter 38: I wasn't crying till the last line...the tears just burst...my jongkey feels is just...and the song...
Amblhama #3
Chapter 35: And Lunew?
Meakapike
#4
Chapter 32: Oh. This chapter was amazing and yet so sad. The music went perfectly with it and everything almost made me cry. I feel so bad for Trinity. This was so beautiful.
iluvbubbles_yay #5
Chapter 31: NO NO NO NONONO THAT'S HORRIBLE ;; I MEAN WE PRETTY MUCH KNEW IT WAS COMING BUT NOOO ;; their panic at being caught, the pain of their first meeting and kibum trying to keep himself sane and thEN THE SECOND MEETING AND THEY'RE SO GLAD IT'S GOING TO BE ALRIGHT BUT IT'S NOT IT'S REALLY NOT AND SPEAKING OF OTHER THINGS THAT IT'S NOT WELL ITS JUST NOT FAIRRR Their love for each other is so pure and just pure okay how can SangKi not see tHAT HOW CAN YOU IGNORE THAT THEY'RE NOT A THREAT THEY'RE IN LOVE AND WONDERFUL AND THIS IS PAIN OKAY ;; they're just perfect and amber calling out the window like thank you amber they nearly made it but not enough ;; gosh they were so close :/ and then ever-heartless SangKi informs him about how he could have saved him minutes after death that is horrible he is horrible. Like pain isn't enough already. Could've at least told him that before Kibum died ;; Anyways, been morbidly curious about the end to Jongkey's love story for a while. Kind of didnt want to in
Meakapike
#6
Chapter 31: I CAN'T!!! I CAN'T! I CAN'T! I CAN'T! Why would you do this to my heart!!?!?!?!?!??!?! This was so sad and so painful! I can't even. Everything was so heart wrentching! Jonghyun screaming for Kibum after they had been separated and later on when Kibum dies on him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't. The words they said to one another.....this was sooo beautiful but sooooooooooooo sad.
khruzader
#7
Chapter 33: thanks for the update.. :)
sungkyunnie
#8
Good job authornim, I love it!
Meakapike
#9
Chapter 31: Awwwwww Onew is the sweetest ever! I loved this! I also loved their kiss! This was awesome.
Meakapike
#10
Chapter 30: Oh my goodness! This really made me want to cry! Couple this memory with the music and I couldn't help but feel so moved. I feel both for Daesung and Bom so much!!!