Forget Our memories - Contest Entry

Description

Life.

Its unpredictable.

Why?

One second you're madly in love and the other you're not.

One second you're having the funest time in your life and then your poor, you become bankcrupt.

You'll think it was bad luck.

You'll think it was bad luck when I had to leave.

You'll think it was bad luck when the person I loved is leaving me for my best friend.

You'll think...

Wrong.

It isn't just bad luck.

Its fate.

I never believed in fate.

Not until I met her.

Not until we were forced to leave.

It was probably then, I stopped beliving in fate.

Fate doesn't take control of my life.

I do.

So I'm going to get you back.

Sulli, belive me.

Foreword

Guys! I'm back with my fourth fic!

But its different cause it will be for a contest.

This was previously named heartbeats but I have decided to change it and the forward too.

This story is for mysharona626's AFF Summer fiction contest.

The prompt I'm using is " Baby I'm sorry, don't let these tears blur the happiness of your memories my love"

Main Characters :

Taemin

The main character of the story- being the son of a famous journalist, he is forced to move often.

After timeless breakups, he has become cold and decides never to be too involved into anything.

But when he meets Sulli, its a different story.

Sulli

 

The other main character.

She's optimistic always and cares for everything and everyone around her.

She loves nature a lot, especially flowers.

An innocent girl who never knows a lot about love.

She finds herself attracted to Taemin.

But one day, She is in danger of losing him.

What will she do?

 

Minho

Choi Minho.

Taemin's best friend and Sulli's neighbour.

He's the one Sulli trusts when she meets up with a huge problem.

Does he help her?

"I love you forever and ever"

" Please don't leave"

"I promise, I'll come back"

" Marry me"

"Tell me its not true!"

" Sulli hasn't been truthful"

" She's got myocardial"

" Baby I'm sorry, don't let these tears blur the happiness of your memories my love"

" I love you"

" Goodbye"

 

 

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Capsule #1
I just finished this story and, I cried ;____;<br />
thanks for the awesome story and don't worry I will surely check out the sequel and goodluck with the contest! ^^
vagel_91
#2
The story is nice, I enjoyed reading it but I know it's abit rushed due to the constraints you have for the competition. <br />
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I'm just curious, the myocardial disease you are refering to is dilated cardiomyopathy is it? because everytime I see the word myocardial in chapter 4, I was abit lost because myocardial just mean the muscle layer of the heart. I will alway relate it to myocardial infarction (heart attack) which doesn't seem to fit your story.<br />
dawn_0330 #3
it's very beautiful..<br />
I almost cry :")<br />
KrystalHana #4
I love it!!<br />
Your writing is awesome!!<br />
I hope you'll win the contest!!<br />
Curious to know how you would continue the story...<br />
Good luck!!!
letsgetit
#5
I love! love! love! it! XD although it made me cry a bit i loved it^^
kpopartory
#6
Nice read<br />
Good Luck with the contest!
larrystylinson #7
AHAHA YOU NOE WHAT. I SAW THE POLL. THEN I WAS HOPING FOR 2MIN-->IKR OMG-.- THEN I SAW IT AND I WAS LIKE AWWWWW D:
blessdevil
#8
sequel please!like they meet in the next life and they seem to know each other when they meet for the first time or something!
TickleMePink
#9
omg! he died, he died! :'( I hope you could do a full-length story about taelli again. I loveee this so much! <3<3