Pepero Kiss

Description

 

Jong Kook and Ji Hyo are on the same team. But what happens when they have to do the pepero mission?

My heart sped up to about twice its speed, the blood pounding in my ears as her face got closer to mine, bitting away at the chocolate covered biscuit. I could feel a blush heating my cheeks as I stared at her pink plumb lips that were perked out in a way that teased me and my control. I condemned the PDs and their seemingly evil scheme of making the required length one centimeter. How was I going to make the biscuit one centimeter without my lips meeting her's?...

 

 

Foreword

 

Based on an idea that randomly popped into my head. Will try to finish this one and the other two fanfics soon, ok? Hope you will like it. Will be uploading a few more fanfics in the near future. 

Copyrights go to the RM PDs and the RM cast. 

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windflower01 #1
Chapter 1: Amazing and well written! ?
AbaraiM5 #2
You are truly amazing.. i felt like kookie is talking to me for real telling me about his feelings.. loved this sooo much.. you have this great talent of expressing the feelings
bolivya_sa #3
That was soooooo long but really amazing:)
putrielfira #4
Chapter 1: i hope it's true and they can go to public
Mithani #5
Chapter 1: deabak
fighting
melwen #6
Chapter 1: what a great story for our beloved spartace i love your story thank you very much ...... figthing
spartace_jjang #7
Chapter 1: DAEBAK! REALLLLLY DAEBAK. Love it so much, authornim. pls write more if you can. please...i m begging u :)))))
runningheroes #8
Chapter 1: GREATEST ONE SHOT EVER.

I absolutely loveeeeee this story! The words are really expressive, not just those boring words, and i truly appreciate that. It's really fascinating to find a fanfic like this since I rarely find one with perfect grammar and vocabulary. The storyline was very nice, and it describes Jong Kook's feelings perfectly. If this isn't perfect, then I don't know what is.

The only thing that bothers me is the punctuations used in the conversation. Only that. What a great job, author-nim! :D
AceLove #9
Wow!!! I loved it! Great and beautiful story authornim!!! ^0^
spadenoace #10
Chapter 1: This is quite long - it's nicely worded and the development (thank god happy ending!) was great too ^o^
I just thought that it did get repetitive at times, this is from Jongkook's perspective but it seems almost too introspective at times (I did end up skimming a couple of paragraphs towards the end-middle there) you know? I did enjoy it however~
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