Wolf's Bane

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They'd finally told the world their secret...and revealed a few about themselves that may just tear them apart. 

Foreword

"But I don't belong he--." The other's hand clamped over his mouth, muffling his protests.

His breath came hot and uneven behind Wu Fan's palm. Chanyeol's brows knit together and he squeezed his eyes shut. Inhaling shakily, he drew in his bottom lip and left his weight to the wall. 

"You're one of us," Wu Fan whispered to him hotly, moving his hand to cup the other's chin and tilt his head upward. "Look at me."

Unable to do anything else, Chanyeol turned glistening eyes toward the other. "You're not going anywhere. Not if I have something to say about it."

Chanyeol wanted to believe him. He wanted so badly to feel some measure of comfort in the other man's words. He wanted this feeling of helplessness and despair to leave him once and for all...

 But the waver in Wu Fan's gaze shook him to his very core.

 

Critics and Reviews

 

" Interesting and something new.... the suspense and thrill it gives me was beyond ordinary...I couldn’t ask for more."  -World of Literature Review Shop

 

 

 

 

Saw the video and couldn't help myself. But I'm gonna twist this so hard, you won't even see it coming. >=D

Also inspired by the featured fic When It Strikes done by deemused

 

Dedicated to my friends on Chat...they know I couldn't help myself...

 

 

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ThatOneOtherWriter
So for those lovely people who are still around. I'm going to reread this and do my best to complete it. Thanks a bunch for not giving up lol, even if you prolly forgot this thing.
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Ayangyeng #1
Chapter 5: I hope u ll update this some day..
anieina #2
please continue this fic..
blackluna #3
Will you still continue this? I really love how this is going and would love to keep reading. ^_^
anieina #4
please update ㅠㅠ
yoongis-cupcake #5
Chapter 1: :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
WhistlingPotatoe #6
WHAT YOU UPDATED WHAT WHAT
kpopartory #7
Chapter 5: when fear is so strong, and yet love wants to overpower that fear
Amalya #8
Chapter 5: Despite the fact that very little happened this update, it was incredibly emotionally charged and rather leaves you with more questions than answers considering Yifan's desperation in convincing Chanyeol of something the latter isn't even aware: the words he spoke when he was unconscious. I think that's what is the most frustrating at this point considering we still don't know entirely what's afflicting Chanyeol, and now he's talking in his sleep fit enough to scare Yifan. Hmm.

The opening was simple enough and helped us to remember what happened the last chapter as well as remind us that they otherwise have fairly normal lives, if a bit structured and filled with training. You did a very good job of describing all their tiredness and I really did love seeing tiny glimpses of some of their personalities when they were grumbling in the training room. lol

But yes, you also do a very good job of highlighting the intensity of their relationship. How long have they been together now? I'm not sure if that was covered yet. >.> I certainly had mixed feelings on the potentially ual hint in the bathtub and I definitely found it odd that Yifan started there in terms of reminding Chanyeol what was his. Then again, I guess it is a bit cliche to begin with the heart anymore. lol It was a very tender and touching scene overall though and you can definitely see that Yifan just wants to be able to take care of Chanyeol. I loved the statement to both Chanyeol and the monster in his head. That was a nice touch.

In terms of continuing with the ness or not... I think it could hinge on who starts it. It does feel semi out of place given the circumstances, but also right because of them, with the emotional high they're both running on and that terrible sense of vulnerability. I suppose it really depends on how you want to take it. Chanyeol might just need a solid night of sleep in his lover's arms with the knowledge that he's loved outside the physical (cont...)
Loving #9
Chapter 5: I like it a lot so far! <33
toffeemilk #10
Chapter 5: Yifan's love for Chanyeol is just so heartwarming and nice to read TTTT I kept rereading the part at the end where he reassured Chanyeol that he'll be alright because he know's Yifan is there and!!!! wow I really love this a lot ;;;;;;;;;;;;
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