silverfish

Description

 

 

they are something subtly tragic,
like two windows that are built side by side
never to face each other.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Foreword

a/n: my entry for The Sky Is The Limit Round Three Subround Three (how am i still here skldgakjdf). i'm not sure if i'll be able to finish this in time, but i'll try my best to.

purposely written in three different point-of-views. 

 

 

"...an hour isn't just an hour - but a little bit of Eternity dropped in your hands - and who knows what to do with it?"  - Tennessee Williams, A Streetcar Named Desire

 

 

for everyone. thank you.

 

 

 

 

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Krystalocked #1
Chapter 1: I really really really really really really really really loved it. Your wrtiting style is soooooo unique and awesome. Feelings. I'm dying here.........
eseech #2
Chapter 1: SO OKAY I SHOULD'VE DONE THIS AWHILE AGO ;A; But let me just say I'm a fan of all your stories, and for some reason this story really touches me, which is odd since all your stories touch me but idk man this one was like love all over and no i'm not just carelessly avoiding homework ;A;

THAT DESCRIPTION MAN. urghh that description ;A; SAY WHAT YOU WANT BUT I LOVE LOVE LOVE ANALOGIES AND THIS ONE JUST HURT IN THE FEELS <3 I never really thought of windows like that, and I'm really feeling the feels if you know what I mean <3333 So pretty much you had me from the beginning and everything else was just a rollercoaster of FEELS. But I really really really like your writing like you don't even understand how much your writing punches me in the feels

SILVERFISH OMFG THIS STORY WAS ANOTHER PUNCH OF FEELS. So basically I died during the description and then the story came to chop up the rest of my feels which I didn't manage to kill efficiently. I love how you relate it back to dream-catching, and you make silverfish sound so nice and glittery and sparkly that someone once said 'ew silverfish' at school and I immediately thought of this and wanted to catch one ;A; DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU DO ;A;

I also like the fact that all your stories involve a little bit of thinking. LIKE THAT SOUNDS REALLY MEAN but a lot of stories will just tug at me and I'll float off and not focus but your story I can do that but sometimes I don't and actually try and figure out who's talking ;A; If I'm right (which I'm usually not), first person is Jiyeon, second person is AJ and third person POV is Yoonji? Urgh, fell in love with your characters as well and ASKJDASJASDJH OMFG THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE THEIR LIVES EVERYONE SOUNDS SO PERFECT IS THIS EVEN LEGALL?? You have a ridiculous talent of making people notice things they usually don't, and as always your style is flawless and thank you so so so so so so so SO much for this godliness <3

if you ask me this should've won BECAUSE IT'S REALLY PRETTY~
swabluu #3
Chapter 1: your writing just makes me want to go u__u because i'm too much in awe to do anything but go u__u how to explain in words sobs ;;
kanqwu #4
Chapter 1: Goodness the tone of the story...I can't even place what it is, but it moves me. The three points of view were a cool idea. I like how you use them.
Geez. I don't know if I've told you this, but you inspire me a lot. Writing things that evoke so many different feelings for me...I appreciate your writing a lot.
Don't ever stop :3
devilgirlmaria #5
Chapter 1: OMG THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT :D <3333 xxxxxxx
devilgirlmaria #6
*I SOB IN THE CORNER* it seems like your doing your job meaning KILLING ME damn girl I can't wait :D <3333 xxxxxxxxx
Kaosuhime #7
YES YES YES CAN'T WAIT

(highfive for cramming it in the last few days XD)
smolder #8
YOU CAN DO THIS
GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST!
smolder #9
omg this foreword
is so beautiful

and the title too
gawd i'm looking forward to reading this ;;
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